Re: The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes	22-Jul-02/4:07 PM
My first reaction was complexity, i undersatnd the writers grief, but i feel he has created a paradox for himself in his lack of content. At present, it just looks like a simple stalker poem, a kinda art nouvea rip off of teh late 1950's stalker poems of the late Jay Durham.
Re: The Poison by TheTiredTyrant	22-Jul-02/4:27 PM
Wow. There is so much anger and hate in this poem, i just want to go and give the writer a hug. Inspiring.
Re: The Poison by TheTiredTyrant	22-Jul-02/4:27 PM
Wow. There is so much anger and hate in this poem, i just want to go and give the writer a hug. Inspiring.
Re: Ambition? by TheTiredTyrant	23-Jul-02/10:16 AM
Reminds me of a girl i once knew.
Re: Arts stare by Art Glocken	27-Jul-02/8:40 AM
I like this. It has a lot of elements to it. Water, Flowers, Bees, all very natural, which is what good poets use. This is a good first attempt, let down by a mysoginist tone.
Re: ? by Nimrod's son	27-Jul-02/8:44 AM
I like this, it reminds me of a crossword that i did yesterday, 1 down....couldnt get it for a toffee....
Re: the queue by Nimrod's son	27-Jul-02/8:51 AM
Like it, its almost like im there, queueing in a Mcdonalds waiting for that elusive cheeseburger...turns out to be soggy...
Re: Painting by Art Glocken	27-Jul-02/8:55 AM
What the writer is on about i dont know. To me it represents a wall in a kids playroom, when some brat has put there grubby little fingers all over it....angst-ridden.
regarding some deleted poem...	27-Jul-02/9:20 AM
Get this guy a life man!!! He should go out, Try Ii, If you like it, do it, if you dont, try it you might like it. Still 1010...