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the queue

Member since 2002 · Posted 26 Jul 2002 · 4 comments

Here we stand Going nowhere 7 in front 9 behind waiting for the end we wait then we move we wait more movement more waiting finally we're there anti-climax.

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[8] horus8 26-Jul-02/2:31 PM Reply

that's how i felt yesterday surfing the wedge. i wanted to drown the fuck out of myself, but i just wouldn't go down. do you go down G-man. drink newcastle allday twist fatties...hiyah...a

[10] Art Glocken 27-Jul-02/8:47 AM Reply

i undersatnd the poets frustrations

[10] johnnyfontaine23 27-Jul-02/8:51 AM Reply

Like it, its almost like im there, queueing in a Mcdonalds waiting for that elusive cheeseburger...turns out to be soggy...

[10] Mister Cakes 27-Jul-02/10:39 AM Reply

Ha ha. Life outloud brilliant. I like this one Nimrod.