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the queue (Free verse) by Nimrod's son

Here we stand Going nowhere 7 in front 9 behind waiting for the end we wait then we move we wait more movement more waiting finally we're there anti-climax.

johnnyfontaine23 27-Jul-02/8:51 AM
Like it, its almost like im there, queueing in a Mcdonalds waiting for that elusive cheeseburger...turns out to be soggy...




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