poemranker ::20 most recent comments by phoenixxx and replies

Comments byphoenixxx, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Once by phoenixxx 15 Jun 2003, 10:07 AM
I apologize. I was inspired by those 2 lines to write this poem when I first read the book. I used the lines and then didn't look at the poem for over a year, therefore did not remember from whence they were taken.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 14 Jun 2003, 11:06 AM
What is this supposed to be? Its a random, half introspection inspired and begun with a third grade rhyme. True, I don't like you and think you are an idiot, but this poem deserves low marks anyways.
replying on Once by phoenixxx 14 Jun 2003, 11:03 AM
They aren't plagarized, they're borrowed. If you're going to try and be insulting in a forum such as this please use correct spelling and grammar. Also, try and see if you can refrain from the foul language.
on Sweet, Sweet... Daddy by Jeremi B. Handrinos 13 Jun 2003, 2:48 PM
Wow, that's pretty bad. The poem makes an attempt at something important, but falls far short. In your comments, and your poem you lack syntax and proper grammar. Find a new hobby.
on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 12 Jun 2003, 1:42 PM
Nice.
on My girl by simone_girard 12 Jun 2003, 1:39 PM
Wow, that had some potential, had some good points, but you tried to hard to rhyme it and so it all fell apart. Good effort though.