Re: There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8	1-Jun-03/6:24 AM
this is more like the horus I enjoy reading...sorry about the 5 I gave on your other poem...maybe i shouldnt have been so smug and just said i didnt really care for it.sometimes, your poems get a little too involved and loose m half way through. most of the time though,I enjoy your writing....again..sorry ps...lol...i see you have found all my poems and given me 5's....touche!
Re: I shot speed by horus8	31-May-03/11:19 PM
a little hard to dance to...i give it a 5
Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer(Revised) by Deborah Carter	31-May-03/11:06 PM
I like this version a lot better...you got it going on girl
Re: Midnight Dance by Deborah Carter	31-May-03/11:04 PM
lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
Re: a comment on I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who	27-May-03/6:05 PM
well pink...i also see room for improvement. Got a little carried away on this one...perhaps it should go to the trash bin
Re: a comment on I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who	27-May-03/6:04 PM
pink...I need to do some re-editing...at the time I wrote it, it made sense...now...i'm not so sure. I think I possibly got a little overcome with emotion...perhaps this one should go to the trash bin huh?
Re: Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna	27-May-03/3:27 PM
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice. We have all had our gardners
Re: The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter	24-May-03/9:18 PM
I noticed this one is not arranged by Bill Murray...do you have another version or has this one not been edited as yet