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Midnight Dance (Lyric) by Deborah Carter
Come dance with me in the light of the moon While fireflies light up the night sky And I'll whisper so softly as to feel like a breeze And you'll see yourself in my eyes Hold me so gently sway with the wind Turning me ever so slow One step and two steps gliding along The moon keeping watch the stars all a glow Whisper so softly that no one can hear Those things you find pleasing those things you hold dear And spin me and turn me till morn's first glim light Come and dance with me all through the night

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.6666665
Weighted score: 5.1986713
Overall Rank: 4563
Posted: May 31, 2003 11:00 PM PDT; Last modified: May 31, 2003 11:00 PM PDT
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[10] lil cindy lu who @ 64.12.96.46 | 31-May-03/11:04 PM | Reply
lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 131.111.8.102 | 1-Jun-03/5:54 AM | Reply
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