poemranker ::Midnight Dance by Deborah Carter

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Midnight Dance

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 May 2003 · 2 comments

Come dance with me in the light of the moon While fireflies light up the night sky And I'll whisper so softly as to feel like a breeze And you'll see yourself in my eyes Hold me so gently sway with the wind Turning me ever so slow One step and two steps gliding along The moon keeping watch the stars all a glow Whisper so softly that no one can hear Those things you find pleasing those things you hold dear And spin me and turn me till morn's first glim light Come and dance with me all through the night

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[10] lil cindy lu who 31-May-03/11:04 PM Reply
lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 1-Jun-03/5:54 AM Reply
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