on The Best This Dream Can Offer(Revised) by Deborah Carter
31 May 2003, 11:06 PM
I like this version a lot better...you got it going on girl
on I shot speed by horus8
31 May 2003, 11:19 PM
a little hard to dance to...i give it a 5
on There is no Happy Hour in Bakersfield, Ca. by horus8
1 Jun 2003, 6:24 AM
this is more like the horus I enjoy reading...sorry about the 5 I gave on your other poem...maybe i shouldnt have been so smug and just said i didnt really care for it.sometimes, your poems get a little too involved and loose m half way through. most of the time though,I enjoy your writing....again..sorry
ps...lol...i see you have found all my poems and given me 5's....touche!
ps...lol...i see you have found all my poems and given me 5's....touche!
on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna
27 May 2003, 3:27 PM
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice.
We have all had our gardners
We have all had our gardners
on The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter
24 May 2003, 9:18 PM
I noticed this one is not arranged by Bill Murray...do you have another version or has this one not been edited as yet
on Midnight Dance by Deborah Carter
31 May 2003, 11:04 PM
lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
on some deleted poem
29 May 2003, 7:16 PM
this is very nice john