on I shot speed by horus8
31 May 2003, 11:19 PM
a little hard to dance to...i give it a 5
on The Best This Dream Can Offer(Revised) by Deborah Carter
31 May 2003, 11:06 PM
I like this version a lot better...you got it going on girl
on Midnight Dance by Deborah Carter
31 May 2003, 11:04 PM
lovely, almost mystical and very nice rhythm
replying on I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who
27 May 2003, 6:05 PM
well pink...i also see room for improvement. Got a little carried away on this one...perhaps it should go to the trash bin
replying on I Am(Defined) by lil cindy lu who
27 May 2003, 6:04 PM
pink...I need to do some re-editing...at the time I wrote it, it made sense...now...i'm not so sure. I think I possibly got a little overcome with emotion...perhaps this one should go to the trash bin huh?
on Blush Of The Winter Rose by kassanna
27 May 2003, 3:27 PM
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice.
We have all had our gardners
We have all had our gardners
on The Best This Dream Can Offer by Deborah Carter
24 May 2003, 9:18 PM
I noticed this one is not arranged by Bill Murray...do you have another version or has this one not been edited as yet
ps...lol...i see you have found all my poems and given me 5's....touche!