Re: pavement by faded	8-Oct-02/10:15 PM
Loved it, i hope you are all right now.
Re: AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	8-Oct-02/10:13 PM
strange. i didn't enjoy this much.
Re: Mommy, why does -=DarkAngel=- use 'an' so much? by <{Baba^Yaga}>	8-Oct-02/10:10 PM
That gave me a chuckle.
Re: Mean Matt was so mean, when a homeless guy asked him for change he gave him a -blank- by beakism	8-Oct-02/10:04 PM
Angry?
Re: Frayed Edges by ShellBell7799	8-Oct-02/10:02 PM
Very well done. Very nicely portreyed. Imagery that sticks with you.
Re: The Mill by vulcan	3-Oct-02/9:57 PM
The vulcan... an alien who supresses his/her emotions to allow logic to prevail unhindered. excellent poem.
Re: Shadows by darren67	3-Oct-02/9:54 PM
I can relate completely to your theme. Read my poem "human self pity" see if you like it. At least you are aware of the "unreal" things in your life.
Re: IMMIGRATION by ali	3-Oct-02/9:51 PM
nice pace
Re: Baby Steps by SpiffyDoo	3-Oct-02/9:49 PM
Anticipation, experience.
Re: Gutless by temptalia	3-Oct-02/9:47 PM
Very raw, i get the picture. That is the mark of a poet after all isn't it?
Re: #17 by mikejedw	3-Oct-02/9:42 PM
Calming, nice.
Re: I Wish by liljsmith87	3-Oct-02/9:41 PM
I don't know too much about poetry, i am still quiet young in the scheme of things, but this is a nice daydream, reality does play a part. A road we all must eventually face. It's still nice to dream though. Sorry about the score, but you didn't have any use of real form in your writing, just content. We all learn as we grow. ps- hope you find your girl.