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Re: Brush me away by nothingtoanyone 27-Apr-04/1:07 AM
This makes no sense whatsoever.

1. You appear to have omitted a word in line 1 between the words "my" and "has".

2. When you say, "broken into an unfixable size," do you actually mean, "broken into an unfixably small piece"?

3. You appear to have omitted a word in line 3 between the words "my" and "away".

4. When you say "rift raft," do you mean "riff raff"? If so, please consult a dictionary to discover the meaning of the phrase "riff raff" before reconsidering your use of the phrase.

5. When you say "dang," do you mean "dank"?

6. This poem fails.

7. You fail.

8. Q. E. D.

9. Thanks!

10. -10-
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/7:50 AM
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Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:21 AM
Neither shalt thou lie with any beast to defile thyself therewith: neither shall any woman stand before a beast to lie down thereto: it is confusion.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:21 AM
Thou shalt not lie with mankind, as with womankind: it is abomination.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:21 AM
And thou shalt not let any of thy seed pass through the fire to Molech, neither shalt thou profane the name of thy God: I am the LORD.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:20 AM
Moreover thou shalt not lie carnally with thy neighbour's wife, to defile thyself with her.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:20 AM
Also thou shalt not approach unto a woman to uncover her nakedness, as long as she is put apart for her uncleanness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:20 AM
Neither shalt thou take a wife to her sister, to vex her, to uncover her nakedness, beside the other in her life time.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:20 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of a woman and her daughter, neither shalt thou take her son's daughter, or her daughter's daughter, to uncover her nakedness; for they are her near kinswomen: it is wickedness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy brother's wife: it is thy brother's nakedness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy daughter in law: she is thy son's wife; thou shalt not uncover her nakedness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy father's brother, thou shalt not approach to his wife: she is thine aunt.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy mother's sister: for she is thy mother's near kinswoman.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy father's sister: she is thy father's near kinswoman.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy father's wife's daughter, begotten of thy father, she is thy sister, thou shalt not uncover her nakedness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy son's daughter, or of thy daughter's daughter, even their nakedness thou shalt not uncover: for theirs is thine own nakedness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy sister, the daughter of thy father, or daughter of thy mother, whether she be born at home, or born abroad, even their nakedness thou shalt not uncover.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy father's wife shalt thou not uncover: it is thy father's nakedness.
Re: a comment on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:17 AM
The nakedness of thy father, or the nakedness of thy mother, shalt thou not uncover: she is thy mother; thou shalt not uncover her nakedness.
Re: A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26-Apr-04/5:17 AM
None of you shall approach to any that is near of kin to him, to uncover their nakedness: I am the LORD.


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