poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Fraser Allonby Q.C. (101-120) and replies

Comments bywFraser Allonby Q.C.w, 101–120 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Brush me away by nothingtoanyone 27 Apr 2004, 1:07 AM
This makes no sense whatsoever.

1. You appear to have omitted a word in line 1 between the words "my" and "has".

2. When you say, "broken into an unfixable size," do you actually mean, "broken into an unfixably small piece"?

3. You appear to have omitted a word in line 3 between the words "my" and "away".

4. When you say "rift raft," do you mean "riff raff"? If so, please consult a dictionary to discover the meaning of the phrase "riff raff" before reconsidering your use of the phrase.

5. When you say "dang," do you mean "dank"?

6. This poem fails.

7. You fail.

8. Q. E. D.

9. Thanks!

10. -10-
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 7:50 AM
You quendo
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:21 AM
Neither shalt thou lie with any beast to defile thyself therewith: neither shall any woman stand before a beast to lie down thereto: it is confusion.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:21 AM
Thou shalt not lie with mankind, as with womankind: it is abomination.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:21 AM
And thou shalt not let any of thy seed pass through the fire to Molech, neither shalt thou profane the name of thy God: I am the LORD.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:20 AM
Moreover thou shalt not lie carnally with thy neighbour's wife, to defile thyself with her.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:20 AM
Also thou shalt not approach unto a woman to uncover her nakedness, as long as she is put apart for her uncleanness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:20 AM
Neither shalt thou take a wife to her sister, to vex her, to uncover her nakedness, beside the other in her life time.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:20 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of a woman and her daughter, neither shalt thou take her son's daughter, or her daughter's daughter, to uncover her nakedness; for they are her near kinswomen: it is wickedness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy brother's wife: it is thy brother's nakedness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy daughter in law: she is thy son's wife; thou shalt not uncover her nakedness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy father's brother, thou shalt not approach to his wife: she is thine aunt.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy mother's sister: for she is thy mother's near kinswoman.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:19 AM
Thou shalt not uncover the nakedness of thy father's sister: she is thy father's near kinswoman.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy father's wife's daughter, begotten of thy father, she is thy sister, thou shalt not uncover her nakedness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy son's daughter, or of thy daughter's daughter, even their nakedness thou shalt not uncover: for theirs is thine own nakedness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy sister, the daughter of thy father, or daughter of thy mother, whether she be born at home, or born abroad, even their nakedness thou shalt not uncover.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:18 AM
The nakedness of thy father's wife shalt thou not uncover: it is thy father's nakedness.
replying on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:17 AM
The nakedness of thy father, or the nakedness of thy mother, shalt thou not uncover: she is thy mother; thou shalt not uncover her nakedness.
on A Proclamation to Our Lord by Joe-joe 26 Apr 2004, 5:17 AM
None of you shall approach to any that is near of kin to him, to uncover their nakedness: I am the LORD.