Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub	9-Mar-03/3:51 PM
Not excatally my type of poetry but it's ok ... i guess
Re: a comment on dreams by babygurl420	9-Mar-03/3:49 PM
Agreed
Re: a comment on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642	9-Mar-03/3:40 PM
Hey thanks for the advice, and by the way, i'm over him!! That's a fairly old poem.
Re: forgiveness by elizabethann	8-Mar-03/6:27 PM
i think the way this poem kinda leaves you hangin is wierd, but i think i like it!!
Re: hehehe by Freethinker1602	8-Mar-03/1:30 PM
true true
Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems	8-Mar-03/1:23 PM
Line six needs a little work but besides that i really like it alot!!