| Re: this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub |
9-Mar-03/3:51 PM |
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Not excatally my type of poetry but it's ok ... i guess
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| Re: a comment on dreams by babygurl420 |
9-Mar-03/3:49 PM |
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| Re: a comment on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642 |
9-Mar-03/3:40 PM |
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Hey thanks for the advice, and by the way, i'm over him!! That's a fairly old poem.
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| Re: forgiveness by elizabethann |
8-Mar-03/6:27 PM |
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i think the way this poem kinda leaves you hangin is wierd, but i think i like it!!
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| Re: hehehe by Freethinker1602 |
8-Mar-03/1:30 PM |
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| Re: if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems |
8-Mar-03/1:23 PM |
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Line six needs a little work but besides that i really like it alot!!
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