on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub
9 Mar 2003, 3:51 PM
Not excatally my type of poetry but it's ok ... i guess
replying on dreams by babygurl420
9 Mar 2003, 3:49 PM
Agreed
replying on To You (Please Critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
9 Mar 2003, 3:40 PM
Hey thanks for the advice, and by the way, i'm over him!! That's a fairly old poem.
on forgiveness by elizabethann
8 Mar 2003, 6:27 PM
i think the way this poem kinda leaves you hangin is wierd, but i think i like it!!
on hehehe by Freethinker1602
8 Mar 2003, 1:30 PM
true true
on if only you could read my mind love by sk8boardandpoems
8 Mar 2003, 1:23 PM
Line six needs a little work but besides that i really like it alot!!