| Re: Fragrant Blossom by Jody Conn |
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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A wonderful whine in an imperative language
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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i get it but in my opinion poor use of parenthesis. in my opinion viva la hayes code.
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| Re: the coldest hell by skaskowski |
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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oldest is a fallacy in my opinion. are superlatives fallcies? peace.
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| Re: unsalvaged by skaskowski |
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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rhyming has utility. i especially liked how it said a-toned instead of s-toned. the following is not personal: does anybody know how to wirte a poem that is not about death?
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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did you hear the one about puking?
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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i think i know what you mean. crib death. the following is not personal: does anybody know how to write a poem that isn't about death? this poem has a good beat and you can dance to it. i give it a nine.
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16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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1. read ask dr 2 2. comment
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| Re: Ghost in My Swimming Pool by ObiWonKn |
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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this is the third time this written this this morning. does anybody know how to write something that is not about death? I ask out of utility and curiousity not out of bitterness. just frustration
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| Re: Ode to Thomas by RosiePosie |
16-Mar-02/1:21 AM |
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i met a guy named thomas and wrote something called mix for the co-incarnated. i was not overly concerned about doubt. it has utility. so, criticism: overuse of meaningless words like (1) truth, (2) destiny, and (3) sanctity; remember you have an audience. try numbers instead : )
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