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Ode to Thomas (Free verse) by RosiePosie
Here we are, just hand in hand
Taking the path most chosen
But
walking with such sacred steps
We'll trip, we'll fall, we'll get back
up
For never more perfect a pair
Souls destined, entwined, sparkling
With love, for knowing madness
Can only bring content.
Here you
are, pushing past the norm
Filling hollow hearts with wonder
Catapulting kisses with brevity
And drawing out reality
For just
one moment
To speak my name
I'm drawn into your breath
Your warmth
Your sanctity.
Living Juliets love
So tripped down into you
Romeo's incessant tears
Never could compare
To your hands gentle
touch
To your hearts eternal care.
My love, My Star filled night
Be here to forever guide me.
And We'll keep walking
The path to
truth, to destiny.
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Overall Rank: 2319
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:16 AM PST
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