on Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul
24 Apr 2003, 1:42 AM
Insanity is abandoning the same place the sane man is standing. This diagnosis is handing a prior notion demanding we all have an equal understanding. This is why we see people landing all over the spectrum of sane to insane, and it's no true reflection cause a brain is a brain. But somehow that's no exception. we're expected to reach perfection
replying on isms and ities by Amelia
24 Apr 2003, 1:30 AM
why would you consider it a confine
to cause one's words to ryhme?
do you think it not a rythmic design
for as such these sounds to intertwine?
to cause one's words to ryhme?
do you think it not a rythmic design
for as such these sounds to intertwine?
on Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT
23 Apr 2003, 9:41 PM
beautiful...10
on Rainy Days by Minnow
14 Jan 2003, 10:13 AM
some holes in the flow, but the imagery and remorse are vivid, almost alive! Anyway, great poem I really felt what you were saying about the unforeseen rainy days...
on The Breathing Dead by Caducus
9 Jan 2003, 10:15 AM
beautiful...great emotional expression and the end is honestly breathtaking....probobly what you were going for too
on Am I Still Here? by Ranger
8 Jan 2003, 5:51 AM
perfection and to say the least, an interesting question...the answer lies on which dimension....4th perhaps???