| Re: Am I Still Here? by Ranger |
8-Jan-03/5:51 AM |
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perfection and to say the least, an interesting question...the answer lies on which dimension....4th perhaps???
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| Re: The Breathing Dead by Caducus |
9-Jan-03/10:15 AM |
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beautiful...great emotional expression and the end is honestly breathtaking....probobly what you were going for too
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| Re: Rainy Days by Minnow |
14-Jan-03/10:13 AM |
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some holes in the flow, but the imagery and remorse are vivid, almost alive! Anyway, great poem I really felt what you were saying about the unforeseen rainy days...
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-03/12:54 PM |
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surely this is no poem, perhaps a small dash of emtion to compliment a high school english assignment...i'd say sophomore, maybe junior year
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-03/12:58 PM |
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good start...ends on the sour note you claimed it to be
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-03/1:19 PM |
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A myth! certainly this is not one. For calling yourself the wife of God, surely you are not too close to His heart
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
19-Apr-03/1:20 PM |
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but as far as poetry goes, i applaud
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| Re: Fighting erosion by INTRANSIT |
23-Apr-03/9:41 PM |
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| Re: almost by wordho |
24-Apr-03/1:35 AM |
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lines two and three are beautiful, but of course sad as well
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| Re: Staying Sane by ThoughtfulSoul |
24-Apr-03/1:42 AM |
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Insanity is abandoning the same place the sane man is standing. This diagnosis is handing a prior notion demanding we all have an equal understanding. This is why we see people landing all over the spectrum of sane to insane, and it's no true reflection cause a brain is a brain. But somehow that's no exception. we're expected to reach perfection
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