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The best word in here is "anf' which, where I come from, means <toot>.
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20-May-03/10:18 AM |
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20-May-03/10:20 AM |
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Politicians and cops should have to take piss tests weekly.
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| Re: Tingling by INTRANSIT |
20-May-03/10:23 AM |
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| Re: Love Squirts by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
20-May-03/11:33 AM |
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20-May-03/5:16 PM |
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21-May-03/4:35 AM |
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One death 2 luv would cut it better. Yr bst wrk bi far.
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21-May-03/8:06 PM |
inbound invalid.
Voice boxes himself silly.
While double parked.
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| Re: Water Runs Deep by shwenatjadeflower |
21-May-03/8:12 PM |
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"quatet" it could only be better if it was a twatet. Could you incorporate say... waterskiing sumo wrestlers playing ping pong in between jumps, because that would be even more damn organic.
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21-May-03/8:30 PM |
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22-May-03/12:32 PM |
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22-May-03/12:37 PM |
Three corrections
"with enough stregnth" strength.
"back curved like a knife" Jack knife.
august capatilized.
Very good poem Rebecca.
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| Re: Was/Were You? by Alyssa91 |
22-May-03/2:02 PM |
This is not concrete. This is concrete;
Hey! Shut up, and cut my grass. (Concrete) by horus8
Mowed for sanity.
A lawn for the first time
in nearly six years. Front and
back, and even the sides. The grass
tending ritual has not changed very much,
but I have. We both needed water when it was
all over. It, more so than I. Is There a noble
meaning behind the act of grooming. It promotes
blooming I'm assuming. I currently have a bloody
hole in my stomach. That statement is telesematic.
Being too analytical apparently does have a down
side. Constantly worrying mentally has begun to
surface physically. Guess that I should have
respected more,
the back seat,
and kept my,
trap shut,
sewed my,
lid shut
Learned
how to
not say
but-but
I can't
<typo>
$grass$
^^^^^^^^
He's swell,
Cracked bell,
It is all water,
from the same well.
What am I afraid of ?
Disease carrying insects.
Twilight zone on DVD in B&W.
unaware of my filthy receptacle.
Who, or what, I can and can't affect.
I am going to take off while I still can.
Being a complacent young man that can "coolit".
With an exquisitely decorated oriental flip fan for
Nero. I wonder how many years will pass by again before I
stumble on another lawn that I'm forced to mow, water, hoe.
Zero.
Fascicle.
Pure-blood.
Topknot.
Carbon 14.
Antiparticle.
Merry-go-round.
Water-table.
Incontrovertable.
Chevalier.
Pretzel.
Suffocate.
Abstractionalist.
<can't you>
<just let>
<some shit>
<not have>
<to always>
<be about>
<god devil>
<cunt cock>
<nice sock>
<just you>
<thank you>
For nothing, but that constantly
evaporated feeling of receding,
and diminishing into something
else that has to do with you. You,
and nothing else. Just you, yes, you.
You, and yours, such wealth smiled
stealth. I want to be you. Tell your
people about you. Mock you! Say
I know you, to tow you, around. I,
your blessed shadow boxer burn out.
Your elbows and knees exfoliated free.
Then you'll see how you are
the only one I see, I see, I see
through your skirt, and flesh
and marrow, I see...
No worth in...
Tommorrow...
Without you...
CUT!
<{And violently rootless my love}>
<{violent 'rootless' my lo-}>
<{-lent 'rootless' my}>
<{rootlessness'}>
<{rootofmy}>
<{ego}>
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| Re: Trash Report by Miggy |
22-May-03/2:09 PM |
This must be your weak rejoinder. I wonder, sometimes, about your well being *sigh*. Ah well.
Flatchicks don't skate they get flatter *boink*.
Great song by the way, strong chorus. Firm bridge. The verse could be a bit more descriptive, but then again that would be asking a lot from your mental handicap, wouldn't it.
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| Re: time weights by brazen |
23-May-03/1:53 AM |
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The Gregorian calendar only succeeded in killing is quicker, that's for sure.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
23-May-03/1:55 AM |
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Chipper, yes, hanging around, no doubt for round two.
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| Re: Immortal Coil by Exiled_humanity |
23-May-03/1:58 AM |
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Super! Could you make it third person next edit? Because,I believe it would strengthen your, for shit, grammar, and make the reader even more fucking tired.
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| Re: The Alluring Nightmare by Exiled_humanity |
23-May-03/2:02 AM |
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Congradulations! You have perfect antiwriting accidentally trying to go 'deep' no doubt. I never thought I'd live to suggest horrible circumstance intervention as a cure, but, go get raped or abandoned as soon as possible and we'll have a controled experiment to see if that indeed is what your writing is missing.
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23-May-03/2:08 AM |
I guess.
Yes, YES! that's it!
(not you, I'm picking out new drapes for the den with my interior decorator 'flam-ee' [he's great with upholstery] sorry) Where were we?
Ah yes, voting.
"I shouldâve known you would to the obvious" Lovely grasp of language here, really, you're amazing.
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23-May-03/2:10 AM |
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Is this the part where you explode. I hope so. Because I'm running out of fucking popcorn.
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