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23-May-03/2:10 AM |
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Good Lord you fucking suck.
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23-May-03/2:12 AM |
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You give new meaning to plecostami world wide. You are the Queen of suck.
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23-May-03/2:14 AM |
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You are the relentless suck looming around all corners. Truly, you suck without abandon. You courageously suck. You put the word brave behind suck.
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| Re: Mirror to Mirror by Roisin |
23-May-03/2:17 AM |
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You should let me run with this. I'd fucking prime it to a high luster edit. An Olympian edit, if you will.
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| Re: An Ode to Anal Joy by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
23-May-03/7:09 AM |
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23-May-03/7:13 AM |
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"You have just come on". What? What does that mean? PMT?Pre menstraul tourniquitte.
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23-May-03/11:54 AM |
Her napkin:
Covered in kisses and ketchup.
Lies between us on the table.
A wrinkled mess of red stained white:
The slow moment passed.
On this fast food day.
Tick
Tock
Tick
I glance at my wrist then up at her.
Catching her looking like an old woman.
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| Re: ADAM IS A HEMASEX by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w |
23-May-03/12:02 PM |
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24-May-03/1:59 PM |
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"A deliverer of birth." i've heard of a double negative, but a double positive? We can only pray you're raped by a ten foot nigger, and sold on the black market.
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24-May-03/2:18 PM |
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"and the heroin plays guitar" from where a little seat on his spoon? The 'junky' you idiot.
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24-May-03/2:20 PM |
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| Re: Para Metres by Blue Magpie |
24-May-03/2:23 PM |
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Well, I say, not concrete, but a fine ode none the less.
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24-May-03/2:24 PM |
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Shimmies her dress up. Other than that, uproarious.
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| Re: Aurora & Eclipse by OneFingerAnswer |
24-May-03/2:36 PM |
Because I was in a fucking hurry, that's why, and it would take to long, here:
A glimpse of light,
you came into my life.
Bright, beautiful, and splendid,
but all too fleeting.
I let the light shine upon me,
enjoying it.
Yet the light reflected off of me
in ways that I know I cannot understand.
The shine changed me, my visage.
To all who could see,
I had changed,
and yet they never knew
the me of before.
The smile, a trick of light
that shows the hairs on one's face.
A young man becoming.
Noticed, but still unknown.
Showing up, but not to stand out.
Now that the light is gone,
yet again the faces change.
Now in the dimness they still
won't see why.
They will not notice the fading shadow
of said smile.
They never knew you.
For a while, I basked in your light.
I eclipsed the truth
I hid you as you requested.
Now you retreat again.
The light is gone,
and the shadows have come back.
Now I must become acustomed
to the dark.
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24-May-03/4:23 PM |
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26-May-03/12:09 PM |
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If your going to use my name sycophant? Try saying something intelligent, like for instance, "hi, I have one testacle and a pet model airplane, by the way, I am an extremely lonely and sad person".
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26-May-03/12:16 PM |
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The only problem here is your lack of poetry and grasp upon reallity, because, even a first year (psych student) can see that you plainly have issues about your tiny penis and detachable nose. I would sugget moving out of your mother's basement as soon as possible and quit eating so much cream of wheat.
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26-May-03/12:19 PM |
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Keep the title (because it shows the paradox of your legless talent, and depth of your blunt toothed vulva) but make th "poem itself" about an ugly asian chick who discovers one day that she's not ugly... She's a broken record." Then and only then will you be closer to the truth behind why you really suck.
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26-May-03/12:24 PM |
spiraling
silent
sporatic
third
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| Re: Hold That Pose by Wulf |
26-May-03/12:34 PM |
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