poemranker ::20 most recent comments by horus8 (461-480)

Comments byhorus8, 461–480 back. Include replies

on Sagittarius by INTRANSIT 15 Nov 2003, 12:19 PM
And that's why you settled for driving a truck in life.
on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2003, 12:23 PM
Jesus, that was just shit poor. Hey I know? Ask Rockmage and his clan of Crap poets to put it on the best list for you, Nentwined won't mind, afterall his poetry fucking sucks too. Nothing like a bunch of complacent weekend poets pooling for you. Here's a 0. Please learn how to spell.
on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2003, 6:44 PM
Why'd you erase the comment?
on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2003, 6:46 PM
Why did you erase
The comment on Intransit's
poem? Cuz you're so smart.
on some deleted poem 15 Nov 2003, 6:54 PM
Sweat.
on Common ground. by INTRANSIT 16 Nov 2003, 1:58 PM
A great read.
on I Can't Believe You by Katzclear 17 Nov 2003, 3:50 PM
There are mistake in the last stanza L2, and S7 L1
on Breakdown of Poetry by eyrbare 17 Nov 2003, 3:54 PM
Pulp, squish, papyrus.
on some deleted poem 17 Nov 2003, 3:56 PM
The last line could be dramatically inproved.
on Hidden by Miggy 17 Nov 2003, 4:03 PM
"Every moment it will begin" any moment...


"with all the past we’ve been though" through

"When I’m not gone afar
Problems we never resolve" And this just makes no sense.
on some deleted poem 17 Nov 2003, 4:10 PM
That's fucking the best ever "warped depeche mode dildo" lol!
on some deleted poem 17 Nov 2003, 4:18 PM
A clear victory. 10.
on some deleted poem 17 Nov 2003, 4:35 PM
I want to feel you up like my little turtle.
on some deleted poem 17 Nov 2003, 4:38 PM
I suppose saying I clicked on the wrong poem is a little late now huh? Cadacus, I just want you to know I wasn't in the least bit surprised or curious.
on Jerry and Jack by eyrbare 17 Nov 2003, 5:47 PM
Why is this a sonnet?
on (no title) by savagelymakeitcount 17 Nov 2003, 5:49 PM
Call it "Thermos"
on "Burn" by goddessbyfire 18 Nov 2003, 3:12 PM
One sided, and lovely. 7.
on Oral Sex by Shit-Crumpets 18 Nov 2003, 7:01 PM
Your name alone blows anything you could ever wrighte away.
on Helium by peaceseeker 18 Nov 2003, 7:05 PM
Absolutely the best read today, if not all month. 10!

and a GOLDEN QUE TIP AWARDE.
on Helium by peaceseeker 18 Nov 2003, 7:06 PM
And not because I part time as a helium balloon either.