| Re: Sagittarius by INTRANSIT |
15-Nov-03/12:19 PM |
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And that's why you settled for driving a truck in life.
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15-Nov-03/12:23 PM |
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Jesus, that was just shit poor. Hey I know? Ask Rockmage and his clan of Crap poets to put it on the best list for you, Nentwined won't mind, afterall his poetry fucking sucks too. Nothing like a bunch of complacent weekend poets pooling for you. Here's a 0. Please learn how to spell.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Nov-03/6:44 PM |
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Why'd you erase the comment?
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15-Nov-03/6:46 PM |
Why did you erase
The comment on Intransit's
poem? Cuz you're so smart.
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15-Nov-03/6:54 PM |
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| Re: Common ground. by INTRANSIT |
16-Nov-03/1:58 PM |
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| Re: I Can't Believe You by Katzclear |
17-Nov-03/3:50 PM |
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There are mistake in the last stanza L2, and S7 L1
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| Re: Breakdown of Poetry by eyrbare |
17-Nov-03/3:54 PM |
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17-Nov-03/3:56 PM |
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The last line could be dramatically inproved.
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| Re: Hidden by Miggy |
17-Nov-03/4:03 PM |
"Every moment it will begin" any moment...
"with all the past weâve been though" through
"When Iâm not gone afar
Problems we never resolve" And this just makes no sense.
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17-Nov-03/4:10 PM |
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That's fucking the best ever "warped depeche mode dildo" lol!
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17-Nov-03/4:18 PM |
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17-Nov-03/4:35 PM |
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I want to feel you up like my little turtle.
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17-Nov-03/4:38 PM |
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I suppose saying I clicked on the wrong poem is a little late now huh? Cadacus, I just want you to know I wasn't in the least bit surprised or curious.
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| Re: Jerry and Jack by eyrbare |
17-Nov-03/5:47 PM |
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| Re: (no title) by savagelymakeitcount |
17-Nov-03/5:49 PM |
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| Re: "Burn" by goddessbyfire |
18-Nov-03/3:12 PM |
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One sided, and lovely. 7.
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| Re: Oral Sex by Shit-Crumpets |
18-Nov-03/7:01 PM |
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Your name alone blows anything you could ever wrighte away.
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| Re: Helium by peaceseeker |
18-Nov-03/7:05 PM |
Absolutely the best read today, if not all month. 10!
and a GOLDEN QUE TIP AWARDE.
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| Re: Helium by peaceseeker |
18-Nov-03/7:06 PM |
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And not because I part time as a helium balloon either.
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