| Re: i'm bad at waiting by silvertongueddevil |
4-Aug-02/12:14 AM |
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Sorry a nomad settled just grows rude
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| Re: i'm bad at waiting by silvertongueddevil |
4-Aug-02/12:14 AM |
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Sorry a nomad settled just grows rude
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| Re: An Unusual Elegy by psychedelic |
4-Aug-02/12:44 AM |
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Feeling a little moody this evening? Zanex is the quicker picker upper downer. kale.hoof.beak.fountainn
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| Re: The Crutchling by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
4-Aug-02/12:56 AM |
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tonight our featured poet is..none otherthan..dirkstrangle..i mean dark angel i will judge them all out of sheer lack of lotion in the house. children this is a pirates delight and one of my da faves. try it. it's wicked ale..its the crutchling..which would..actually make a great childrens book and miniseriest
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4-Aug-02/12:59 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/1:01 AM |
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tuberousand low in sodium???
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| Re: Wicked Danny, A Lesson For You All by ruella |
4-Aug-02/1:03 AM |
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malignently satisfying. the end goes poo poo to hastilyn
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| Re: Contra Mundum by psychedelic |
4-Aug-02/1:11 AM |
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that's cute, but you failh
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| Re: Feminism by april fool |
4-Aug-02/12:32 PM |
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i clean better, cook healthier, cock crows longer, fight harder, and complain a million times less. i am man, i am the thin line that seperates dildo toting butch dyke daddy's girls from turning you into the next patty hearst. i am the creature that would bleed dead for those i love. protect the pride, i'm sorry but breasts are not meant for war, and most wars are started over a womans decrepid vagina lotus anyways (helen of troy). men are the stones that allow the water of femininity to be carried more efficiently to the ocean, remove the river's bed stones, and the earth will drink you to nothing.pussy.drugs.land and religions create wars. the strength of a young man's blood and courage to die for what he loves is what finishes one. so do the dishes i see some schism on that glass!??
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4-Aug-02/12:40 PM |
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keep writing this bullocks, and they'll never change. in fact this poem was a stanza shy of turning me into kevin spacey in that movie "seven" thank you for ruining my morning. you are not titan, you are trinket. your hoof is soft and porus like pumice. i pray you 69 better than this atleast you can keep busy when your quill snaps from the weight of weak inkn
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4-Aug-02/1:23 PM |
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some things are just worth dying for. like fundips, loitering, highschoolsweethearts, and the ever reclusive 5 minute piss. ahhhhhhhhh.n
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| Re: The Set Back by horus8 |
4-Aug-02/3:02 PM |
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doust thou want me to release the wagehals, hote isht der taug mein froint. your geifern smells of bauberin influence. aRE YOU A TREULOS wretch. do you like your shiezer packed by a professional schneideldorf. geikeln frettchen. lover.fillament. mackeral.ferns.reaper.i
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| Re: A Passing Love by razorgrin |
4-Aug-02/5:52 PM |
oh..indeed..surely that wasn't my point. god knows how i enjoy dining on all of your cutting edge abbreviations. yourL33's and yourAsls. and your all of your other timeless classics. i don't have a clue as to what any of it means.i'm so sheltered and eager.oh master of the round turd..i beseech you.. have patience..i know not of the power of pascal and cobal, and how you must have been one of the leading fore skins or perhaps creator of these fine prehistoric languages, or perhaps we are back to the days of pagers and upside down love messages..here flip your monitor upside down cuz here comes one now
"em erob uoy" "nillicinep yrt" your talk of costant shitting is as stimulating as me and my uncle farting at five and ten at grandma's kitchen table. piles and piles of fart and shit tapes stacked up until i fell in love and then realized the errors of my gross ways. life is not all poo, and if you hold your gas and talk in secret internet codes your dreams will come true. mickey mouse and donald fuck off said go put on your costume and join the procedings. god knows your fans are waiting. ASL! DIKTRKL! CNTPUMPR!
p.s you don't really have to flip the screen you can use a mirror if you still have any left in your house since the accident. vanerialwarts.bigstick.ireland.saltmine??
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4-Aug-02/5:57 PM |
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for once i agree with that twitdo shut the fuck up, and choke on the sun you pale green booger jedi mockery
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| Re: Tattered by VintageLove08 |
4-Aug-02/6:00 PM |
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yes but the joy luck club was an eleven lettered asian wok of intrigue. i like big tits on gooks.oh nice poem would taste better with a bullet in my cock holea
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| Re: An Online Junkie Confesses by Jigg |
4-Aug-02/6:08 PM |
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Me too. try palm piloting, that way you can get out and go to the xxx book store while you press send you can bend and offend. for a dollar in quarters.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
4-Aug-02/6:16 PM |
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denziens? what is that german for THROUGHING ALKASELTZER AT SEAGULLSfucccckkkkkkkkk!my head fuckkkkkkkkkk!shit.fuck.cuntdrippingtailstroking reptiles. she is indeed picking up pointers, just go and read her tripe yo see the truth fuuckkkk! the madness is forcing me to go unshowered and o.d on this limited city sleeping ladida.s
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| Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8 |
5-Aug-02/12:33 PM |
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some may try. others will cry. but how doust you see? with my pee in your eye?`
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
5-Aug-02/1:14 PM |
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the "typo" in question here is really just a symbolic way of saying the whole lot of it is shite, and i happen to be very found of shitty tripe..i'll have you know..and as for not reading any of it? that simple?.. i wish it was! but unfortunately this is a writers forum(where ironically 'we' read then write) which is what i wake up in anticipation, hard and throbbing daily, to do. now i love writing and i lust reading. i wish you could grasp that notion with something other than a three fingered babies hand. writers take writing seriously. that's why they do it all day every fucking day. i suggest you try that, before posting your gibberish for all to critique at a public poetry site (then whining when someone says something that hurts your itty bitty ego) if you can't handle negative feedback i suggest you find another hobby to fein interest in cuz i won't be the first, and i won't be the last. perhaps you should keep your tampon strings in your journal where they will be safe and secure out of reach. cuz if i see one. i will tug..then sniff..and then i will be blatently honest with my "opinion" on it's smell and texture (your blood is young and thin), maybe i should just smile and nod my head...pat your back..say keep up the good work honey, but if i did would you think me braver, wider, more patient, and leniant. i am not your father, nor your boyfriend, or girlfriend, or friend. so i don't have to tell you what you want to hear, nor would i. so back to poetry..okay.. your title is weak, and has nothing, or the opposte of nothing to do with anything you've written, not that that always matters, but the content is all common sense, "of course insomniacs don't sleep" "of course the city, day or night has a rhythm" "denizens of the dark" well naturally where else would they be? this poem is as about as stimulating as cornflakes, maybe next time we could add berries and hire a clown to light his farts on fire at the breakfast nook. or perhaps dig up Mrs. Plath to spoon feed you back to life. cuz if you live like you write, you should just opt for one or the other, or neither! i here knitting is coming back!
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| Re: Dangers by RWAndersen |
5-Aug-02/1:16 PM |
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How about mental retardation + small penis+ alchohol= 75% of all law enforcement officials. hug a cop. they need the love!
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