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12-Oct-02/4:03 PM |
charmingly uncomitted. boringly brazen..and flitteringly aloof
*poof* {8} nice spoof. could you maybe take out those annoying question marks, and possibly put in'? good luck.i
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15-Oct-02/12:30 PM |
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when fiction becomes nonfiction, the salt, and osmosis and black pearled tears..well..they read me to sleep...like you use too.
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| Re: I am Cuba by cacophony |
15-Oct-02/12:34 PM |
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change clock to cock and cuba to Bali. then duck! boom! 1.
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15-Oct-02/12:44 PM |
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my python boots are poised lets dirt kiss the carrots. fuck it lets dirt kiss the be-atches! yee haw! p.s lets put pirahana in the coi-pond. indeed.
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15-Oct-02/12:54 PM |
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the fourth stanza could use an extra noun or an adjective actually two more nouns and an adjective. to help balance it out with the other stanzas, and also help tie in the image of that stanza which kind of struck me as vaguely yearning to become as strong as the others, still wonderfull however. 7.
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| Re: Bowed by <~> |
15-Oct-02/12:56 PM |
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i'm with him! but i'd rather be with you. hee hee. my hoof is blushing.
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| Re: haiku's i love but i cannot do them well enough by UAFANTHORPEY |
15-Oct-02/1:01 PM |
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well that's two out of ten, can you find the other 8 missing things that you don't have. i can.
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| Re: here now today by daniella |
15-Oct-02/1:09 PM |
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most can't. you're have way there. don't stop now.
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| Re: anyhow by daniella |
15-Oct-02/1:13 PM |
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lets submerge. sign language underwater. 8.
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| Re: forgetfulness by daniella |
15-Oct-02/1:20 PM |
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"towards the unending", should be the ending. 9. p.s. never ever rent the panic room. it is by far the worst scripted and edited movie i have ever scene. no wonder i haven't seen jared leto milling about lately he's in hiding three doors down. ha lol! poor bastard. let's kill david fincher.
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| Re: d e e p e r by daniella |
15-Oct-02/1:29 PM |
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this is concrete and WINS THE HORUS 8 GOLDEN Q-TIP AWARD ON THIS FINE DAY. loved it! have a fine navy day.9.
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15-Oct-02/1:37 PM |
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jesus christ was no angel and i am so fucking sick of angels and this and angel that angel my nut sac angel food cake and angel souls and heart. Fuck! MY GUARDIAN ANGEL BLOWING AIR KISSES. i am that much more behind for having read this. therefore...toe nail the vagina. and pigeon the dentures. i have to put on the lost highway soundtrack immediately to regenerate the hit points you have stolen from me . bastard. not only do you fail, but you weren't even there to compete. 0.
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15-Oct-02/1:40 PM |
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will you finally please fucking die for christ sake. you're like the guy in a b western who spins around choking and gagging for ten fucking minutes before he finally dies only to twitch for another ten fucking minutes. it's like passing a basketball sized gall stone.
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15-Oct-02/1:42 PM |
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15-Oct-02/1:42 PM |
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you must be mr. jones's girl. nice pants.
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15-Oct-02/3:32 PM |
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yeah you tell them katie key word 'dark' oh and draw from your past...being the raging furnace of wisdom that it tis. lol.d
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| Re: The Devil Made Her Do It by Limness |
17-Oct-02/3:42 AM |
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the chariot? then the star. some dogs bark at nothing..why'd you repost all of these?
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| Re: The Devil Made Her Do It by Limness |
17-Oct-02/11:04 AM |
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not so much this, as the others. i'm aware that this is new. it just seems alot of folks were slate wiping these days and i just thought it was oddly coincidental. that's all.for some the devil means something mysteriously vague and bad?it's all about change though, upside down. rightside up is bound by routine unable to change. tied to your ways and past. that's what mr.chows fortune cookie told me yesterday when i went orange chicken crazy..
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| Re: Fact About the Wind by Ninoy_Instigator |
18-Oct-02/2:29 PM |
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just think if you did a i80 and started walking, you guys might meet up in china then, you could feed the pandas and get naked in the bamboo. i hate bamboo. burp.
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18-Oct-02/2:38 PM |
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i could make you let go. might be a great addition to the end. also trapples, or tramples? perhaps the latter? editing, is for the devil.
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