on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
15 Jul 2002, 8:54 PM
ay yi yi...my eyes are bleeding...i'm sorry, this poem seems very heartfelt, but it sounds like a mix of one of those terrible poems that get forwarded via email and a really depressed teenybopper pop song.
on standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil
7 Jul 2002, 12:04 PM
very strong. i like it.
on Alone by roses are read
7 Jul 2002, 12:00 PM
Great last line, very evocative.
on Hammered Nail by drjhoss
7 Jul 2002, 11:59 AM
This is clunky. Sorry.
on The Red Tree by raysaun
7 Jul 2002, 11:55 AM
mysterious and nice.
on 1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. by mogwai
7 Jul 2002, 11:54 AM
Very sweet. And a cute title to boot!