Re: tears beyond hope by Mystifying	15-Jul-02/8:54 PM
ay yi yi...my eyes are bleeding...i'm sorry, this poem seems very heartfelt, but it sounds like a mix of one of those terrible poems that get forwarded via email and a really depressed teenybopper pop song.
Re: standing on the dry weeds by silvertongueddevil	7-Jul-02/12:04 PM
very strong. i like it.
Re: Alone by roses are read	7-Jul-02/12:00 PM
Great last line, very evocative.
Re: Hammered Nail by drjhoss	7-Jul-02/11:59 AM
This is clunky. Sorry.
Re: The Red Tree by raysaun	7-Jul-02/11:55 AM
mysterious and nice.
Re: 1 of 2,543 things she does that starts fires in your grassland heart. by mogwai	7-Jul-02/11:54 AM
Very sweet. And a cute title to boot!
Re: Jericho by goldfish	7-Jul-02/11:50 AM
Very nice. Good rhyme-and-meter poetry is hard to find these days. I like it!