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24-Dec-02/6:08 PM |
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vulgar and unexpected...but catchy in a sense ((somewhat like eminem (((who i dislike)))))
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| Re: The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird |
24-Dec-02/6:11 PM |
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hahaha thats really cute, and the rhyme scheme is done quite nicely
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26-Dec-02/2:29 PM |
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you got it all!!....definitely a 10
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| Re: Your sacrifice by Crakyamuni |
26-Dec-02/2:31 PM |
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dude....that was powerful and intense and true and amazing and a 10
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| Re: Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w |
26-Dec-02/2:35 PM |
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i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4
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26-Dec-02/2:38 PM |
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sad and moving....? marks in odd places though...4
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| Re: dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined |
26-Dec-02/2:39 PM |
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oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8
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