Re: Hehehe by The Eskimo King |
11-Nov-02/1:52 AM |
Hmm, I don't know whether you're a literary genius in the making or just another serial pervert. Still, pretty good stuff.
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11-Nov-02/1:55 AM |
Dead funny! I like this, this is good shit!!!
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Re: Ten solid facts about -=Dark Angel=-, by his biggest palm frond, me. by horus8 |
11-Nov-02/2:30 AM |
Just what we need, Dark Wanker's own personal sycophant. This is stomach-turning stuff. Horus8, you are either a comic genius or the most pathetic worm on the planet. Either way, this is just tosh.
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11-Nov-02/2:34 AM |
Wow. I like the classical style of your work, it's a pleasure to read. Great stuff, as always.
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11-Nov-02/2:35 AM |
Luvverly imagery! Chalk up another one for the TG-meister!!
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Re: Reasons by little_angel_maria |
11-Nov-02/5:50 AM |
Good stuff, Maria! It flows a lot better than your earlier work, and I think that restricting the length has helped to make your ideas more concise. Overall, nicely done - your poetry just keeps getting better and better! 8 :)
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Re: The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Nov-02/3:06 AM |
Yet more proof that your poems suck arse. Leave this site now, while you still habe a shred of dignity.
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Re: AIDS in a van by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
15-Nov-02/3:09 AM |
Your'e a tasteless homophobe, you can't write worth a damn, and you're a right royal arsewipe. I'd stick a positive comment in there somewhere, but I can't seem to find one...
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15-Nov-02/3:11 AM |
I get your drift......it's all good (bwa ha ha)...!
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Re: Alternative nursery rhymes. by cleverdevice |
19-Nov-02/5:46 AM |
Fantastic - 10! Cleverdevice strikes again!!! :)
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Re: School. by cleverdevice |
19-Nov-02/5:51 AM |
Bravo, tovarisch! Another well-aimed blow at the soft underbelly of the education system!
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21-Nov-02/5:05 AM |
Fantastic for any age, but 14? Holy shit, dude...! Giving this a 10 could be construed as damning by faint praise!!!! :)
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21-Nov-02/5:40 AM |
Another 10 for Miss Calvetti (surely you can write crap poems too, 'cos this ain't fair on the rest of us!!!!!!)! Nice one! :)
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21-Nov-02/5:47 AM |
Damn straight! 8, and top o' the mornin' to you Paddy!
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Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
22-Nov-02/5:34 AM |
Fairly good, if overblown and contrived in places. 5.
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Re: Gilded Stumps of Olde (AN STORY THAT IS NOT AN POEME) by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
22-Nov-02/5:36 AM |
Fair to middling, with typos galore. 4, and see this as generosity, seeing as this beats your usual prattle.
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22-Nov-02/5:58 AM |
Well said! We need to stick up for the very-little-brained bearlike one in his time of crisis (that bastard piglet - he squealed to the tabloids - squealed, pig, geddit?!)! Bravo on your commendable social conscience!!!!!!!!
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23-Nov-02/4:19 PM |
A 10, simply for the sheer audacity of it! See, you CAN be quite witty and pithy when you put a little effort into it! Keep up the good work!!!
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25-Nov-02/2:03 AM |
Yep. Winalot DOES taste like cow's gonads (trust me, I know).
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Re: Wave to the starving children Miss Denmark. by horus8 |
25-Nov-02/2:04 AM |
Very clever! 8 for your troubles, sir!
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