regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I really like the 'streamers' throughout the poem; themes that carry throughout but only a tonue-in-cheek kind of way. Nothing to blatant! Subtle makes me happy.
Re: Colloid by skaskowski	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
I like it, because it's true.
Re: the coldest hell by skaskowski	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
This made me feel a very particular emotion, but I wasn't very happy with the end wording. Very blatant after a very subtle rise and fall.
Re: Apathy by nentwined	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
This sounds like a very personal "insider" train of thought. hadtobethere? Sounds like something was conveyed but I couldn't put my finger on it.
Re: unsalvaged by skaskowski	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
WOW! That was a very moving piece for me. Many emotions came through and your imagery and internal connections flow so smoothly that my mind never left your thoughts. A very great work!
regarding some deleted poem...	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
ouch. I'm afraid that the final words were more gruesome than any visual could become.
Re: The Plum by ruella	16-Mar-02/1:21 AM
The voice of a generation!
regarding some deleted poem...	11-May-02/7:24 PM
Situational haiku is a real haiku. It speaks from the heart. I feel your rage.
Re: Quandries of a Summer-night's Green by Modulo	21-Aug-02/10:50 PM
You don't know WHAT's good far ya!
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Apr-04/5:52 PM
So... what are your rules for haiku?
regarding some deleted poem...	21-Apr-04/5:53 PM
Is this haiku? I have no idea anymore. 'Haiku' is just a word.
Re: Secret Identities Revealed by thepinkbunnyofdoom	22-Apr-04/4:21 PM
Cute
Re: All hail Discordia?(a true haiku story) by razorgrin	28-Apr-04/10:36 AM
I loved that trilogoy! Rock and roll.