| Re: a comment on Drunken note #1 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/12:11 AM |
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one last thought before i leave...it's funny how you say that limonade's poetry has a young...or "undergrad" feel to it...because the vast majority of my teenage friends think it's great but most of my adult friends say the same kind of stuff you guys do. guess i'll just have to grow up before i can write really good stuff like you and god'swife...once again...no sarcasm. night all
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| Re: a comment on Drunken note #1 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/12:08 AM |
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gone to bed. thanks for reading them over. hope to chat soon.
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| Re: a comment on Drunken note #1 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/12:07 AM |
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well sad to say...i need sleep. i have a class in six hours. but thank you for helping me release some anger on a faceless foe...no sarcasm there. i needed to rant. good night to you and god'swife.
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| Re: a comment on Drunken note #1 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/12:05 AM |
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they were written for my girlfriend at the time...not a good stage in my life...for love or poetry...as you can probably tell
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| Re: a comment on Drunken note #1 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/12:03 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Drunken note #1 by blackball |
9-Oct-02/12:03 AM |
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well...i was drunk...i don't remember writing them...and my friends told me they were good. i'm asucker for peer pressure
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| Re: a comment on rapping on caffeine by blackball |
8-Oct-02/11:41 PM |
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i guess what i meant to say was that we are all frail...we live we die...it's the way life goes...it also might have to do with the fact that iwas thinking it up as i was typing it...i dunno
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| Re: why i look like a man by rosiebailey |
8-Oct-02/10:25 PM |
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| Re: From a letter (never sent) by UnityMitford |
7-Oct-02/6:03 AM |
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that's good. are the corners real or metaphorical...cuz if they're real theniwould agree with the lover; it would not be love...but if metaphorical...it makes for a good poem. i'm out 8/10
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| Re: Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof |
7-Oct-02/5:39 AM |
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i like the line about "the artist's discretion". this is gonna sound stupid but after reading comments on this site and seeing how bitchy people can be about other people's work...well truer words have never been said dude. i'm out...please disregard my foolishness
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| Re: The day I told her by dalva |
7-Oct-02/5:26 AM |
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got blasted eh? yeah it happens to the best of us. no worries. when everything looks to be going sour listen to some deftones and break some shit
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| Re: coffee cup by nonee |
6-Oct-02/10:49 AM |
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decent poem...everyday feelings. felt the same way myself
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