Re: a comment on The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee	18-Jan-03/12:55 PM
thanks for the input... that being said, I am 30 yrs old, and I found this poem in an 8th grade journal of mine. I know they don't lose color at night; I think the "fading" bit was meant as a metaphor to the death of the flower and gradual reinvention to seed pod. Adult to elder.
Re: journey to being the top rapper by kliq	23-Oct-02/4:18 PM
good luck at the lucrative world of pro rapping. i heard there's a real market these days!
Re: Flamin Monkey's by Blade	23-Oct-02/4:15 PM
Your plural of 'monkeys' should exclude the apostrophes. I like anything with monkeys.
Re: a comment on Your Mama by jessicazee	23-Oct-02/4:11 PM
This is the stupidest poem i ever writ.
Re: a comment on Comfort Food by jessicazee	23-Oct-02/4:07 PM
tee hee i grew up in Racine & now reside north in the bigger, beerier burg. I like Tenuta's so very much and also the Keno Drive-Inn.
Re: a comment on Comfort Food by jessicazee	22-Oct-02/10:44 AM
I live on the shores of Lake Michigan. Lots of toothsome delights here. Explain your gravity monsters? Matzo balls? I am having a little fun.
Re: a comment on Comfort Food by jessicazee	22-Oct-02/10:43 AM
Ravioli are Italian! I was going for the foods that are filled or stuffed. I guess I left out empanadas, meat pies, tamales, shumai, etc.
Re: a comment on When Your Best Friend Says You Drink Too Much by jessicazee	18-Oct-02/10:07 AM
Incoherent yes. I had a few too many whiskeys lastnight methinks to start tapping away at the keys. I need to iron this out a bit, I agree.
Re: a comment on Homemade Greetings by jessicazee	18-Oct-02/12:23 AM
ooh I'm glad you like my stuff. i think you're (god's wife) one of the besties here.
Re: always the end to this good night by nentwined	30-Sep-02/3:45 PM
use more concrete imagery, but I like your style