Re: a comment on A.M. by renwick	16-Sep-02/2:06 PM
Sir, this isn't username ranker.
Re: witch's bliss by crin	15-Sep-02/10:18 PM
I like it although something about the first two lines in the last stanza don't sound right to me. I give it a 7.
Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus	15-Sep-02/10:16 PM
Other than this line: "You claim my voice is false and charms" ,which could have been written better such as "full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.
Re: a hero jfk by dylansong	15-Sep-02/10:11 PM
I'm not sure if the gramatical "errors" were purposeful or not.
Re: crispy by skaskowski	15-Sep-02/10:10 PM
Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.
Re: lost by Katie	15-Sep-02/10:09 PM
The begining sounds like a list but I like that there is emotion in it. I give it a 5.
Re: a comment on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman	15-Sep-02/6:54 PM
My poem, Mantis, is far worse.
Re: Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun	15-Sep-02/6:52 PM
People are angered by the expression of violent acts, they are fools who don't understand the spirit of art.
Re: a comment on Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun	15-Sep-02/6:50 PM
You can't spell EITHER.
Re: a comment on Mantis by renwick	15-Sep-02/5:05 PM
Oops. I didn't mean to remove the other comment about the use of praying / preying. Just reply to it. It was a play on words, perhaps a bad one. Thanks for the criticism.