| Re: Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun |
15-Sep-02/6:52 PM |
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People are angered by the expression of violent acts, they are fools who don't understand the spirit of art.
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| Re: lost by Katie |
15-Sep-02/10:09 PM |
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The begining sounds like a list but I like that there is emotion in it. I give it a 5.
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| Re: crispy by skaskowski |
15-Sep-02/10:10 PM |
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Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.
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| Re: a hero jfk by dylansong |
15-Sep-02/10:11 PM |
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I'm not sure if the gramatical "errors" were purposeful or not.
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| Re: Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus |
15-Sep-02/10:16 PM |
Other than this line:
"You claim my voice is false and charms"
,which could have been written better such as
"full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.
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| Re: witch's bliss by crin |
15-Sep-02/10:18 PM |
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I like it although something about the first two lines in the last stanza don't sound right to me. I give it a 7.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Sep-02/10:21 PM |
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