on witch's bliss by crin
15 Sep 2002, 10:18 PM
I like it although something about the first two lines in the last stanza don't sound right to me. I give it a 7.
on some deleted poem
15 Sep 2002, 10:21 PM
I know the feeling well.
on a hero jfk by dylansong
15 Sep 2002, 10:11 PM
I'm not sure if the gramatical "errors" were purposeful or not.
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
15 Sep 2002, 10:16 PM
Other than this line:
"You claim my voice is false and charms"
,which could have been written better such as
"full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.
"You claim my voice is false and charms"
,which could have been written better such as
"full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.
on Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun
15 Sep 2002, 6:52 PM
People are angered by the expression of violent acts, they are fools who don't understand the spirit of art.
on crispy by skaskowski
15 Sep 2002, 10:10 PM
Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.