replying on A.M. by renwick
16 Sep 2002, 2:06 PM
Sir, this isn't username ranker.
on witch's bliss by crin
15 Sep 2002, 10:18 PM
I like it although something about the first two lines in the last stanza don't sound right to me. I give it a 7.
on Remember-me (an ode to those dropped off at the clinic) by Bachus
15 Sep 2002, 10:16 PM
Other than this line:
"You claim my voice is false and charms"
,which could have been written better such as
"full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.
"You claim my voice is false and charms"
,which could have been written better such as
"full of false charms" or something like that, I really like it. I like the part about fucking the sister. It takes guts or revenge to admit such a thing.
on a hero jfk by dylansong
15 Sep 2002, 10:11 PM
I'm not sure if the gramatical "errors" were purposeful or not.
on crispy by skaskowski
15 Sep 2002, 10:10 PM
Interesting but there really isn't much emotion to it.
replying on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
15 Sep 2002, 6:54 PM
My poem, Mantis, is far worse.
on Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun
15 Sep 2002, 6:52 PM
People are angered by the expression of violent acts, they are fools who don't understand the spirit of art.
replying on Eleemosynary for the undeserving but forward foreigner by ErgoErgun
15 Sep 2002, 6:50 PM
You can't spell EITHER.