Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:51 PM
No, you're doing exactly what I told you not to do. I don't see why you can't just grow up for once in your life and have a mature conversation. This is a mature site and immaturity is frowned upon here, please keep it clean ok
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:49 PM
Please restate that in a way that makes sense.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:45 PM
You mean you think you're special.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:39 PM
Whereas you always sound like the boy who nobody loved, except his beautiful books of foreign languages, which he constantly blabber'd about to all who dared come near.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/1:12 PM
Am I to understand you still a teened-ager? Oh dear boy. Do you have the faintest idea of how old I am? When you look at the bags under my eyes, you can count the years in the soft, leathery folds; to count them all would take a lifetime in itself. When my used jodhpurs are incinerated and the foul smoke billows up into the evening sky, the very scent of Age seeps into every pore and crevice of the wretched, doomed butler-boy. And when the time comes that my bent, wither'd form can bear the weight of my colossal idiocy no longer, and the nursemaid drapes my bow'ls about the manor grounds as has been done since the days of my forefather's forefather's, then it will be as though an eternal brown night has descended upon the peasants who work the lands, for the impenetrable rope of my centuries-cured innards is as a slippery, stinking noose around the doomed village below. And my shaving vest and my razor shall contain my life-essence, and they shall be passed on to my legions of bastard half-erect man-pigs, and my legacy will never die... -10- P.S. bow'ls
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/12:53 PM
This isn't a court of law where arguments and rhetoric are all that matters, its a POETRY FORUM so can you please limit your comments to CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM ONLY? Thanks, we appreciate it.
Re: a comment on Doe by OneFingerAnswer	12-May-04/9:19 AM
-10-
Re: a comment on Doe by OneFingerAnswer	12-May-04/3:02 AM
-no vote-
Re: Doe by OneFingerAnswer	12-May-04/3:00 AM
Great use of 'cried' to rhyme with 'side', but was her head really hung in defeat? I doubt it. You just needed her head to be hung in something that rhymed with 'feet'.
Re: a comment on Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/2:46 AM
Can you spot the difference between a poeme that "contains emotions" and a 'poeme' that "occured during an emotional moment"? And what's this obsession with saying "bow'ls"? That is so immature, I swear. Your just angry that cuddlytiger didn't finish reading one of your poemes, and now your taking it out on one of hers, even though its a quite good poeme.
Re: Bracelets In A Box by cuddlytiger17	11-May-04/4:49 PM
hey guys stop being HATERS this is a great poeme because it comes from the heart and that's what really matters isn't it?/?? Sasha who are you to tell someone what to write about poetry is all about emotions and it doesn't matter what words you use if you're poeme hasn't got emotions then it isn't a poeme -10-
Re: a comment on A Portrait of Antonio Machado (Edit) by Sasha	11-May-04/4:23 PM
I think it's actually because your poemes are hefty satchels of shit, and he wants you to stop posting them.
Re: a comment on After the ice season ~ shamelessly lewd revision by zodiac	11-May-04/7:36 AM
I first encounter'd the word in 1998, when it was reported that George Michael had performed a lewd in a public outhouse. He was busted by the L.A.P.D during OPERATION LEWD RESOLVE.
Re: a comment on I'm not afraid to admit that I am attracted to Robe Lowe by RO-B-LOWE ME PLEASE	10-May-04/5:08 PM
Why wasn't I told that book was online? My copy has totally fallen apart.
Re: a comment on Lover by daveslady	10-May-04/4:47 AM
Yes, every man dreams of a clingy emotional wreck who is utterly obsessed with them and writes unbelievably swollen poetry about them.
Re: a comment on Totally Hair by TanHand	10-May-04/2:59 AM
Ridiculous spelling of 'ridiculous'.
Re: a comment on IRONSHOE by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	10-May-04/12:52 AM
Poetry doesn't have to follow your fascist rules, Sasha.
Re: Ghosts by unknown^user	9-May-04/10:52 AM
I really love the unconventional way you've used commas in this piece!!!!
Re: a comment on The follies befalling an unfledged street poet. by SupremeDreamer	8-May-04/4:06 PM
You clearly put a great deal of thought into your votes, and I think that's very mature of you. Did you think you should give it a -9- as opposed to an -8- because it is a cut above the poemes you usually vote -8- on?
Re: a comment on The follies befalling an unfledged street poet. by SupremeDreamer	8-May-04/3:52 PM
Did you think to yourself: "Yes, this is a good poeme, and I can relate to many of the mastakes it describes, but it just doesn't have that special something which all -10- poemes must have. So I'll give it a -9-"?