Re: Why Work? by TheTiredTyrant	5-Aug-02/8:23 AM
Yeah! Filthy scab! I hate you! I HATE YOU!
Re: Untitled by Tekara	5-Aug-02/8:38 AM
If someone uses a word like "Ah" or "Oh" in a Haiku it means only one thing: They're struggling to get the syllable count right. Not bad though. Perhaps I'll let you off with a stern warning. Or would you prefer six-of-the-best (trousers down) ?
Re: #9 by mikejedw	5-Aug-02/8:57 AM
You had to throw 'spring' in there didn't you? Just couldn't resist it, I guess. Afterall, if you mention 'spring', loads of girls are bound to think 'Oh this Haiku is so beautiful'.
Re: You are the Rain by emilyowey	5-Aug-02/9:04 AM
A good try!
Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8	5-Aug-02/9:11 AM
A good try!
Re: Chicken by robert blake	5-Aug-02/9:11 AM
A good try!
Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8	5-Aug-02/1:19 PM
Thanks for letting me do the voice of Leon Spencer in Sniper.w
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/1:22 PM
You are great/Really great/Honestly, you're really great/But this sucks/And you suck.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/2:12 PM
Yeah, and maybe you're a tart.
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/6:22 PM
'The Turd to End All Turds' is infinitely more classy than 'The Call of Duty'. And anyway, is not imitation the finest form of flattery? Not that I intentionally copied it. Surprisingly, I thought of the title of the poem when I had held in a shit for about 2 days and I knew it was going to hurt like hell when I finally released it. As for you, horus8, I'm tired of hearing you deflate. Eat what's on your fucking plate, or tomorrow you're not staying up late. Cheers mate! asl lol brb.a
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/6:32 PM
Yes. Yes. Those are all valid comments. But I suggest you look at YOUR plate the next time you dine.
Re: I Hate You by mytenderrage	5-Aug-02/7:58 PM
It's really "sad" the way so many people on this site resort to saying "-=Dark_Angel=-'s poetry is crap, therefore his criticisms stem solely from jealousy of your wonderful talent." Can't you see I'm NOT TRYING TO WRITE THE SAME SORT OF POETRY AS RAVEN18? Why would I be jealous of someone who didn't have anything I wanted? I criticise raven18's poetry because it's trying to be meaningful (or whatever), and it fails. Miserably. You may criticise my poetry, but you don't mention in what respect it is lacking. You just vaguely insinuate that it's substandard, in a smug, knowing sort of way. Which is what I would expect from most people, since the default reaction on reading a poeme about something that is "childish" or "insensitive" or "crude" is to tell themselves that it's awful, because their brains would explode if they abandoned for one moment their constant desperate attitude of trying to have the same opinions as everyone else. What standards, exactly, does -=Dark_Angel=-'s poetry not meet? (And don't say something obvious and crap like "maturity, for one. Sensitivity, for another". Those are bullshit standards.)
regarding some deleted poem...	5-Aug-02/8:00 PM
Oh, stop kidding yourself. Can't you see that beauty and cheap sentiment aren't the same thing?
Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z	6-Aug-02/4:39 AM
He only changed his name to escape the commercial ensnarement of his previous name by his record company. Just like I changed my name by Deed Poll to -=Dark_Angel=-. I may have to change it again though, now the FBI is on my trail. Thanks Poetie! Oh, and this poem isn't really an Ode, is it? It's a haiku.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-02/11:19 AM
Yeah, and maybe you ought to wipe your bum and stop being a dumb ass!!!!
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-02/11:34 AM
Why? It is your ass that is in need of a wipe. Not mine. Wipe before you weep, Poetie. Wipe before you weep.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-02/11:43 AM
If you say that one more time, Poetie, I'm telling mummy.
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Aug-02/1:19 PM
Shan't. 'Heliogabalus' is about someone who I know who has the soul of a man but the body of a piiiiig. Since nobody else on this site knows him, the poeme is pointless.
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8	6-Aug-02/1:38 PM
I can't tell if you were just stoned off your face when you wrote this, or if you spent ages writing it and filling it with ancient symbolism. Because it makes no fucking sense to me, and looks like the sort of stuff I write when I'm stoned. It's probably the former. forloner, boner, where's the dog?a
Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	6-Aug-02/4:37 PM
Poetie. At 11:24 you were concerned that I might offend some unknown person whose family has been afflicted by the AIDS. By 11:26 someone in your own family had been afflicted with the AIDS. Now, either more than one person is using the 'Poetie' poemranker account, which is a crime so heinous you ought to be banned immediately, or you are simply talking bollocks. You felt that by pretending to have an AIDS sufferer in your family you could turn your mere conceited moral outrage into personal grief and sympathy. I presume you've already emailed the site owner to demand my permanent exclusion, on the grounds that at least seven of your close friends and family members have died of the AIDS in the last week, with two more due soon. Also, you will have contracted chronic diarrhoea and trapped wind, which will provide you more reasons to insincerely accuse of personal attacks. As for the poeme itself (which, along with Van, constitute my as yet unfinished 'AIDS in a(n) X' trilogy), I thought it raised some particularly thought-provoking points. For instance, you might like to consider, and write some preliminary notes on, the following essay questions: 1. Why did the poete choose a Van and a Glass? Compare and contrast these two AIDS-containing items. 2. Can AIDS really be contained in a glass? And if so, would this provide a method of infecting someone with AIDS without having it yourself? 3. Can AIDS be extracted anally? Would this provide a possible industry for many African countries?