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Untitled (Haiku) by Tekara
Long, silken hair falls Sweat drops from skin, unheeded Ah... the long drought ends
Up the ladder: Glitterati
Down the ladder: James Dean
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10  .. 10
9  .. 20
8  .. 40
7  .. 01
6  .. 11
5  .. 03
4  .. 00
3  .. 00
2  .. 00
1  .. 00
0  .. 20

Arithmetic Mean: 6.266667
Weighted score: 6.1156764
Overall Rank: 1096
Posted: May 19, 2002 11:33 PM PDT; Last modified: May 19, 2002 11:33 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] deleted user @ 205.188.197.151 | 12-Jun-02/7:41 PM | Reply
this poem is sexy
[8] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 217.39.46.136 | 5-Aug-02/8:38 AM | Reply
If someone uses a word like "Ah" or "Oh" in a Haiku it means only one thing: They're struggling to get the syllable count right. Not bad though. Perhaps I'll let you off with a stern warning. Or would you prefer six-of-the-best (trousers down) ?
[n/a] Tekara @ 66.218.35.193 > -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. | 20-Sep-02/12:33 AM | Reply
<grins> Surprisingly enough, I had several words that would have the correct count, but that just seemed to fit better.
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