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Untitled (Haiku) by Tekara

Long, silken hair falls Sweat drops from skin, unheeded Ah... the long drought ends

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 5-Aug-02/8:38 AM
If someone uses a word like "Ah" or "Oh" in a Haiku it means only one thing: They're struggling to get the syllable count right. Not bad though. Perhaps I'll let you off with a stern warning. Or would you prefer six-of-the-best (trousers down) ?




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