Re: Breakfast by Dhanesh M Kumar	11-Mar-06/12:29 AM
Will have to agree with the rest. Last stanza needs fixing. I ain't a great fan of politics and war... but I think, in my opinion, you have painted quite a picture. Bones for breakfast!
Re: The Tale of Hominus Ominus by Blue Magpie	11-Mar-06/12:21 AM
Good work. You got me going till the end. I thought that this would be just some stuff written only to fill a page , ie. when I saw the length.... but you pulled it through. pretty interesting.
Re: Navy Pier by matt door	11-Mar-06/12:10 AM
I ain't familiar with drinks... and tell me, Black and Tan, what is it? Beer? Yeah, cancel the 'Lake'. Good work matt.
Re: Piano by Dovina	11-Mar-06/12:01 AM
The three legged monster with a large stringy mouth..... I take you you haven't had very good experiences with the Piano. Good description of it though!
Re: Sour Apple by ecargo	10-Mar-06/11:52 PM
ecargo, somehow you're good. I get a taste of negativity or pessimism from your poems often, which generally I don't really like..... but somehow you have stuff that brings me back to read more of your work. Quite a bit of imagination too....
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/12:22 PM
Not on your life!
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/12:17 PM
I relly wonder why Alchemy deserves such attention fron two of the fairer sex! What did he do to earn this attention? Dovina, you any clues?
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/12:12 PM
Al, I see that you've missed me all this time I took a break from PR. So I brought you a gift. I hope you like it.
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/12:10 PM
Any fresh insight?
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/12:04 PM
Aaaah! I see you're beginning to meditate. Carry on..... what other insight is there, that you might want to share?
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:58 AM
Al...what's this about you going to hell. Please don't. All the dark gangs might want to rush up to our paradise if you go down and then there'll be chaos. you stay here on earth...... That's where you fit in best.
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:46 AM
Don't act the goat and plead innocence.....
Re: a comment on =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:44 AM
It amuses me...... but I can't understand it, that's why.
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:34 AM
By the way Bruce Almighty, what's happening to you. You still haven't figured out your inspiration and divine voice?
Re: a comment on Just Desserts (for drnick) by ALChemy	4-Mar-06/11:30 AM
Drnink. Don't you think you are being biased... after all, that's what you told me.... and that's why you never voted on mine. Hmmm....I'm offended, I really am. :-) Wish I could really be.
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:25 AM
ALCHEMY? You tell tales eh? My my! Now what's becoming of you?
Re: At Last in the Garden by ecargo	4-Mar-06/11:14 AM
Sings a slight depressing note. It's pretty good though! Lovely choice of words.
Re: There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:07 AM
Dovina, this reminds me of a song... "We are going, heaven knows where we are going We know we are. We will get there Heaven knowsthat we will get there We know we will" Reading your verse made this song pop up in my head. By the way, ]where are you going to.... and chocolates are not good for you... think of all the calories and high fat content..... not a good idea. Take my advice, don't go there.
Re: a comment on There by Dovina	4-Mar-06/11:02 AM
Al, by the way, do you know that my maiden name is Mittra, spelt also as Mithra? (Bengali)... Hmmmmm, that's my day then!
Re: =, <>, & . . . by Dovina	4-Mar-06/10:55 AM
Dovina, you'd better translate this stuff or might be tempted to vote a -0- or a -1-. By the way how's life treating you. I can see you've gone bonkers from what you've written. Looks good though, if only I could decipher it. you should have made it more like morse code. would have been more interesting .