regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jul-05/10:18 PM
God damnit, that's good humor.
regarding some deleted poem...	28-Jul-05/10:23 PM
I went to Indio, Ca. and camped out, so perhaps the imagery was too easy/wonderful for me...but I dont care. This was bad ass!
regarding some deleted poem...	29-Jul-05/10:29 AM
If this truely is a lyric to a song, please stop making lyrics that are so specific and boring. This reminds me of some Dave Matthews/John Mayer/Jack Johnson/new-age "punk" crap that makes me want to vomit. I'm not saying you shouldnt write about this very subject, but try and paint a picture rather than draw a diagram...if you can follow that.
Re: Death On Arrival by Miggy	29-Jul-05/10:33 AM
Pretty good, but nothing special. I like the chorus.
Re: Left by Miggy	29-Jul-05/10:45 AM
Boooooooooooooooooooriiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiing, if you haven't noticed...the whole love-theme you've got going on here may be popular but it sucks. The lyrics are way too specific. This is the type of song girls in High School sing a long to. Try taking some drugs and write about that.
Re: Brighter by Miggy	29-Jul-05/10:49 AM
Boring, boring, boring. Too specific/personal and waaaaay too played-out a theme. Do you write songs for John Mayer? Take some drugs.
Re: I want to slit my wrist and call it poetry by thepinkbunnyofdoom	29-Jul-05/10:58 AM
I must say I enjoyed this read. I gave you an 8, because nobody else had.
regarding some deleted poem...	31-Jul-05/9:22 AM
nice porn piece, it would get a 10 with pictures!
Re: Little Orange Petal Flower by i_am_the_popsicle	18-Aug-05/1:55 AM
It reminds me of the seasonal-depression I expierience. The winter is horrible. The summer is awesome. You're poem is alright.
Re: Fading.+/ by Lindz14	18-Aug-05/9:58 AM
The world is filled with assholes and idiots, don't let them bring you down. I'm glad it seems as though you've come to that conclusion yourself, rock on.
Re: I Love You (song) by TLRufener	9-Sep-05/8:05 AM
Quit ripping off of the Backstreet Boy's material...I mean, I don't blame you-they rock, but it's just not right. I wouldn't write anymore songs if I were you, there's already too much of this boring shit already.
regarding some deleted poem...	20-Sep-05/11:06 PM
This is fucking amazing...I really want to give it a 10, but I cannot give any poem a 10...that would say it is perfect, and that is most impossible. However, you kiss perfection...maybe even slip it the tounge; a very dark, vivid tounge. god damnit this is some good fucking shit...I cant fucking stop swearing its so good. I'm putting in a 9, but I want you to know it is more like 9.95. This is by far the best thing I have read on this site.
Re: Pathetic by Miggy	1-Nov-05/10:37 AM
I like that you've taken something as sad as being rejected by a girl, and rubbed it into their face. That's probably the only thing I like about this, the rest...truely is, pathetic.
Re: Last Call by thepinkbunnyofdoom	17-Jan-06/6:18 PM
I feel like I can relate to this one, I like it a lot.
Re: Cold-Blooded Pillow by drnick	19-Jan-06/9:22 PM
This was called "Sleeping with the Enemy," however due to recent complaints I found that this was also the title to some piece of shit movie and thus could not use it. After hours upon hours of Trial and Error(also the title to a movie) I came up with this, I hope you like it.
Re: When God is Needed No More by ALChemy	23-Jan-06/6:28 PM
Pretty good...I agree with the not needing god part, mostly because "he" does absolutely nothing. It would be better if you didn't believe, and made this something about how we wont need religion when we can all live peacefully without it. Perhaps I will do something like that. Anywho, not bad...
Re: Oblivion by Sway	25-Jan-06/11:28 PM
nice imagery, fuckin beautiful.