regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jun-05/1:59 AM
Weird. a smoke. a g and t.. and an enema is just what I wanted.. nah. -8-
Re: it's tough at times by Jigg	10-Jun-05/2:03 AM
cries
regarding some deleted poem...	10-Jun-05/12:03 PM
I didn't like the sexual content
Re: Acrylic French Nails by Dovina	10-Jun-05/12:12 PM
"Where were the color ordinary" -- hard to say out loud.
Re: Labor. by darby pyn	10-Jun-05/11:44 PM
I like this. At first I wished you had changed the format so that I could see the rhyme...but nah.. I just like it. almost makes me think of a hard core Dr. Suess book in meter.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-05/1:14 AM
I don't know. I like the word 'darkvoiced'
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-05/1:25 AM
graphic
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-05/7:34 AM
It's not your fault if I don't get it.
regarding some deleted poem...	11-Jun-05/7:37 AM
I don't know why "licked the iron mantlepiece" works for me...
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-05/12:46 AM
oh. unrated.
Re: May 10, 2004 by Patsy	13-Jun-05/12:49 AM
Misery is a woman. Ha! nice.
Re: A Hallmark Card for You (With Love) by Bluemonkey	13-Jun-05/11:45 AM
I confess.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-05/11:58 AM
seems deeply personal. some stuff didn't leave any images in my head. It could be me; probably is me. Here they are anyway: "Died daily from devils in playgrounds" "Half read books became leaves." "bastard of childhood" Not really criticisms...just lines that I had to stop on and think about to no conclusion.
Re: Emotionally Unavailable by horus8	13-Jun-05/1:02 PM
I haven't got the words.
Re: Unclean by Dovina	14-Jun-05/12:36 AM
I disagreed with the general premise of your poem. However, I did see the images in my head as I read it.
Re: Racism by Dovina	14-Jun-05/12:54 AM
I like this poem.
Re: Returning by Dovina	14-Jun-05/12:55 AM
I thought of cigarettes when I read this. Camel hard pack. I have no idea why.
Re: Panama by Dovina	14-Jun-05/12:57 AM
raunchy
Re: Prickly Pear by Dovina	14-Jun-05/12:58 AM
I self-define as a cactus that wants a hug.
Re: Sudden Change by Dovina	14-Jun-05/1:00 AM
Fine