Re: Dreams by lil_evil_boi	8-Jun-05/7:04 AM
How 'bout "This is an egg. This is an egg on crack. Any questions."
Re: a comment on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote	8-Jun-05/6:47 AM
Assuming this is D_Q. I was actually talking about all the ranting in your comment and reply boxes. Which by the way I found very entertaining. "My lil slothful Miggletoe?" made me laugh my ass off.
Re: a comment on -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy	8-Jun-05/5:26 AM
Thank you Dovina. I'll drop that last verse. I look forward to reading some of your work soon.
Re: -750,000 in Rwanda by ALChemy	7-Jun-05/6:52 PM
I think you might be right about the last verse. It was a bad Idea to drop pop culture into this and the shame on you message is redundant. The second verse was intended to point out the rest of the worlds ignorance to what was going on but I think I can change the last part a little to add to my point. But I'll have to work on that later.
Re: The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote	7-Jun-05/3:44 PM
You'd think you would have vented all your hostility in your poetry but your cup overflows don't it. This guy must be the thorn in your side. Here's a band-aid -10-
Re: Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe	4-Jun-05/5:58 PM
It would make a good song though.
Re: Vote Goats by ALChemy	4-Jun-05/5:55 PM
Thank you all for your comments. Some classier than others. It was a poem I penned out quickly in response to those who would rather insult you than help you.
Re: The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote	4-Jun-05/5:42 PM
Hypocrite.
Re: Writing dessert by INTRANSIT	4-Jun-05/9:37 AM
This poem makes me hungry. coincidentally my nieces cake is like poetry. It deserves an eat-I mean an 8
Re: A Fool's Errand by ALChemy	4-Jun-05/9:18 AM
Yeah I was going for the fact that we put strain on our wrists when we write, draw, paint etc. and the blood was the essence we put into our art. But I'm sure it probably has been used a hundred times.
Re: The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	4-Jun-05/9:08 AM
The idea is in the spelling... I know. Corny poem. I apologize.
Re: Bookends by INTRANSIT	4-Jun-05/9:00 AM
That was really fun. A completely new format. quite refreshing. The alliterations make everything flow so the reader can just glide along this witty little ride you've constructed.
Re: Soldier by kev_wannabe	4-Jun-05/8:48 AM
You mean "evil that lurks (in) this place"? Unpeacefulness? I'm all in for inventing words but this is too direct a poem for taking such liberties. I like the no BS approach though.
Re: Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe	4-Jun-05/8:38 AM
This is either a brilliant piece of sarcasm or a chocolate covered turd.
Re: Carte Blanche by ALChemy	4-Jun-05/7:18 AM
I used "schizophrenic" because people look like there talking to themselves and when one rings like 5 different people try to answer thier phones.