Re: Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic	31-Aug-05/10:20 AM
Umm... Nevermind.
Re: Intrusion by Sasha	31-Aug-05/10:16 AM
For using the sentence "Wrapped tight as a huge boa round his wood" without refering to a penis I give you -10-
Re: Song of the cannonball ( a drinking song) by INTRANSIT	31-Aug-05/9:53 AM
Somewhere between Monty Python and Sponge Bob Square Pants. In some of the lines the cannon ball seems to reveal his gay side don't ya think. The "Aye!" made me laugh out loud and for that a -10-
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	31-Aug-05/9:43 AM
I don't like the word "Mini-van" in any poem.
Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	31-Aug-05/9:32 AM
I was going to say this is one of the best things I've read in a while but then I noticed you misspelled "bridges" and now it's all just rubbish. So now I have no choice but to reduce your score to a measly -10-
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	31-Aug-05/9:18 AM
Really sweet of you guys. Really.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	31-Aug-05/8:52 AM
This last comment from you came like 2 seconds after I posted mine. My god your obsessed.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	31-Aug-05/8:49 AM
Don't you think that everyone knows you start arguments just for the sake of arguing. The fact that you have to lie and make pranks to feel superior is what disappoints me. I like debating. It's like a mental sport. What you do is let the other team score and then say "Well, I wasn't really trying anyway. Even now I know what I'm saying is falling on deaf ears but at least I can say I tried to help. That's all I wanted to do. Sorry I bothered.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	31-Aug-05/8:30 AM
No just wanted you to see what your tactics sound like.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	31-Aug-05/8:28 AM
Yeah that 101 was an obvious cheap shot. My apologies. I think I just went on because the discussion made for a good debate but to argue things like religion and unfathomable numbers seems to lead nowhere because it's about what you believe and not what you can prove. I do sense some kind of spirituality in you. Like a preacher without a religion. For a new topic of debate see my newest poem Out of the White Hole. It's about black holes and the subconscious and has little to do with body orifices. I know that was shameless.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	30-Aug-05/7:31 PM
Sarcasm: A cutting, often ironic remark intended to wound. A form of wit that is marked by the use of sarcastic language and is intended to make its victim the butt of contempt or ridicule. I used it in most of my comments to you. Do you always resort to saying Ha Ha! I was just kidding when someone exposes what a true buffoon you are. I've seen you use this cop out before. I assumed you just wanted to try to argue for the sake of arguing and I figured why not considering it's a hell of a lot more creative than your poetry. The fact that your a pathological lier only shows us all how pathetic you truly are. You act as if you convinced me about all your bullshit but any intelligent person who reads all the comments can see at some point I'm just getting bored and tired and just telling you what you want to hear. I will waste no more words on your pretentious diaper wearing "breeches". Later fag.
Re: a comment on Quevedo: Psalm by Sasha	30-Aug-05/6:07 AM
I thought with your ample ability to summon the spirits of bygone poets you'd be able to contact him from the netherworld. Maybe he worshiped death. The first goth poem. By the way you got me really interested in those French Symbolists now.
Re: a comment on hallway by skaskowski	30-Aug-05/5:44 AM
Actually your both wrong. It's "Vacuum". Not that I'm the best speller in the world either but I'm Dyslexic and that's not really an excuse but who's gonna pick on a mental gimp right.
Re: a comment on Jack by Dovina	30-Aug-05/5:04 AM
I know what a pun is. It just appeared as though you were actually trying to correct her spelling. "And a repairer of breeches too." would have been clearer. Sorry I'll try to recognise the humor the next time.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	30-Aug-05/4:34 AM
Thanks. Don't know how I missed "brain's". I dropped the periods at the end of the lines for a cleaner look. I see now I missed one of the little boogers. In the transition I used capital letters to imply the start of a new sentence at the beggining of a line. Maybe I'll have to put all the periods back. I'm glad you liked the first stanza. I spent more time re-editing that first stanza then I did on the rest of the poem.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	30-Aug-05/4:19 AM
Originally "It" was "Art" but I felt there was something more mysterious and primal about what I was describing and I wanted the reader to find their own meanings for "It" and the other symbols. I guess "It" could represent the subconscious thought escaping into consciousness. But still I think it goes deeper than that. You’re welcome to give it any meaning you want. I'll wait a few days for more possible suggestions then I'll get to cleaning it up. Thanks again.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	29-Aug-05/1:28 PM
Thanks Beth Your :)'s are always the most genuine.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	29-Aug-05/1:24 PM
Maybe what we see on the outside is inside. So why not create something on the inside and make it on the outside.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	29-Aug-05/1:16 PM
Thanks. I was at a loss for a title till a thought crossed my mind. "Is there such things as white holes?" I researched it and found some interesting scientific theories and yet another metaphor.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	29-Aug-05/12:49 PM
Thanks D. That's pretty much how it came to me. In inspiring lines and images. I wrote them down and then pieced them together adding and subtracting parts till I found somekind of connected meaning in it. (a method of writing that I use quite often.) There was a primal feeling in me that emanated throughout the writing of the poem and I can only hope found it's way into the poem.