Re: a comment on Disfigure by DevilBuni	9-Mar-05/9:17 AM
What do you mean by fleshed out? Like add more?
Re: The Muses by crooked_smile	7-Mar-05/4:13 PM
That has to be the longest poem about not being able to write a poem I've ever read.
Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp	7-Mar-05/3:45 PM
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
Re: a comment on Forsaken by DevilBuni	2-Mar-05/7:48 PM
Most of my poems I write real quick when it comes in my head, so I jot it down and always forget the punctuation. Im working on that and the grammar. I've been rereading my poetry journal and working on it so when I post stuff here or on my other site it will be ready. As far as the content - thats my business. Im not trying to connect with anyone. Those were just the words that came to me one day. Im not saying its the greatest, but thats what made sense to me. Im not going to try and explain the situation other than it was more than a "friend dissing me."
Re: The Path by hummers86	2-Mar-05/7:01 PM
stanza 4 is a little off tempo and some of the rhymes feel forced - like life and stride and made and aid. But overall, I enjoyed it. :)
Re: A Song for Laura by somemorepoetry	28-Feb-05/5:06 PM
The first stanza kind of sounds a little forced and parts dont really make sense.
Re: a comment on Last Time by DevilBuni	28-Feb-05/10:42 AM
I understand and thank you for your comment...just one thing doesnt make sense to me. Part B: wtf does this have to do with me? Are you saying you have a problem with my nick? Please refrain from commenting my handle and stick to the poetry.
Re: domination by midnight	25-Feb-05/7:32 PM
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice