replying on Disfigure by DevilBuni
9 Mar 2005, 9:17 AM
What do you mean by fleshed out? Like add more?
on The Muses by crooked_smile
7 Mar 2005, 4:13 PM
That has to be the longest poem about not being able to write a poem I've ever read.
on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp
7 Mar 2005, 3:45 PM
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
Most of my poems I write real quick when it comes in my head, so I jot it down and always forget the punctuation. Im working on that and the grammar. I've been rereading my poetry journal and working on it so when I post stuff here or on my other site it will be ready.
As far as the content - thats my business. Im not trying to connect with anyone. Those were just the words that came to me one day. Im not saying its the greatest, but thats what made sense to me. Im not going to try and explain the situation other than it was more than a "friend dissing me."
As far as the content - thats my business. Im not trying to connect with anyone. Those were just the words that came to me one day. Im not saying its the greatest, but thats what made sense to me. Im not going to try and explain the situation other than it was more than a "friend dissing me."
on A Song for Laura by somemorepoetry
28 Feb 2005, 5:06 PM
The first stanza kind of sounds a little forced and parts dont really make sense.
on domination by midnight
25 Feb 2005, 7:32 PM
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice