poemranker ::20 most recent comments by DevilBuni

Comments byDevilBuni, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on domination by midnight 25 Feb 2005, 7:32 PM
I really like enjoyed this poem :) Very nice
on A Song for Laura by somemorepoetry 28 Feb 2005, 5:06 PM
The first stanza kind of sounds a little forced and parts dont really make sense.
on The Path by hummers86 2 Mar 2005, 7:01 PM
stanza 4 is a little off tempo and some of the rhymes feel forced - like life and stride and made and aid. But overall, I enjoyed it. :)
on The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp 7 Mar 2005, 3:45 PM
reminds me of a poem I wrote :) Very nice
on The Muses by crooked_smile 7 Mar 2005, 4:13 PM
That has to be the longest poem about not being able to write a poem I've ever read.