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20-Dec-04/9:50 PM |
As a whole, your way with originality is unbelievable. The letter idea was a wonderful expression and did carry a mirrorish type feel.
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Re: Center Of The Universe by Dovina |
21-Dec-04/11:31 AM |
I enjoyed this piece (esspecially the conclusion). 9
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Re: Twin Forks by auscot |
21-Dec-04/6:20 PM |
mmm, I enjoyed this! A literary masterpiece; 10, without hesitation.
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Re: The Drop by auscot |
21-Dec-04/6:22 PM |
Hah, I've never been one to pen a good limerick. Very well done. The meter was a tad off in a couple lines but not enough to render distaste. Bravo! An 8.
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23-Dec-04/9:56 AM |
mmm... this was beautiful! I knew that the brilliant scoundral had to be here somewhere and while scrolling down the names I say, "Hey! There's ed!". The mood was sustained nicely in this and the pictures... reminded me of something in a song.
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23-Dec-04/9:57 AM |
A poem I've read elsewhere many times and, if I may, a litterary masterpiece. Had to vote on this one, it's a classic.
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23-Dec-04/9:59 AM |
Ahh the element. You know, I'd yet to read the third to your series. I don't think I could weigh any of them on any sort of scale. Once more, so much poetic element. Well done!
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Re: "oh" by fevriere |
23-Dec-04/10:01 AM |
Ahh so appeasing. Bravo! The true art of a "Haiku-ist"
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Re: there's no way out by oneglove |
23-Dec-04/10:08 AM |
Quite melancholy. You've done a great job at holding the tone of this piece. Also, the descriptions were phenominal. 10, bravo.
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Re: Lies of Societyâs Guise by PsydewaysTears |
25-Dec-04/10:51 PM |
Well, Lies of Society's Guies has a better rhythmic quality (this is comming from a musician). A lot catchier still in my eyes.
As a whole, if people would take the time to read this piece, I believe they'd be awed.
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