| Re: a comment on Someday by moonlightdance |
6-Jul-04/7:26 AM |
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yeah i meant to put it as a lyric, it was just a careless mistake.
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| Re: a comment on When He's In Me by J.B. Manning |
5-Jul-04/9:36 AM |
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btw, this comes from a person who normally would find the topic a little daunting
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| Re: When He's In Me by J.B. Manning |
5-Jul-04/9:33 AM |
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| Re: Loving You More Each Day by Katrina |
25-Jun-04/12:38 PM |
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normally acrostic poems suck, but this was really great! like dark angel said, you really phrase perfectly the feeling of love
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| Re: The How To on Haikus by <Wankster> |
25-Jun-04/12:35 PM |
the beautiful thing about the english language is that it is so diversified and evolving. poem can easily be one syllable or two. i don't see the big issue here, though i am rooting for two, just because it's funnier.
also amelia: two syllables or three?
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| Re: EGG by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
24-Jun-04/7:33 PM |
Just a note: try saying Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggg
you'll find it's not different from say
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeegggggggggggggggggggggggg or
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeggggggg. that's because, as all choral teachers preach, you can't hold out a consonant without putting an extra vowel on the end. just a thought
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| Re: a comment on Center Of The Universe by Dovina |
24-Jun-04/7:25 PM |
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an understandable comment to be sure, because now, didn't we all like the pretty graphs in our textbooks better than our professors lectures? honestly though, i think the poem puts forth its messure clearer through 'telling' than it might've otherwise
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| Re: My Friend? by Blade |
24-Jun-04/8:29 AM |
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honestly now, have some self-respect
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