Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	16-Feb-05/11:04 AM
lol. But just this morning you said that people of your own race appeal to you more than people of other races. Here you directly contradict Robins-of-your-race and just a few hours ago you were calling Alonby all sorts of vile names. If this is the affection you bestow towared your own kind, I feel flattered to have recieved several recent comments from you containing only a few vile or demeaning slams. I think you'd better get your racism act together.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	16-Feb-05/9:14 AM
Racist!
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	16-Feb-05/8:50 AM
God, don’t be so serious! I fail as a racist. How about you?
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	16-Feb-05/8:33 AM
I discriminate on the basis of who gave me these red roses here beside my computer. I'm a roseist.
Re: a comment on Plastic Explosive Iraqi-Man by Enkidu	15-Feb-05/4:26 PM
You appear to be in complete agreement with the Deleted User above. perhaps a déjà vu of some fantasy in dream-like romantic menory.
Re: a comment on Bleed ,Rip and Tear by NoSage	15-Feb-05/4:06 PM
Imagery is certainly an element of the Sacred Showing. While this sermon uses some imagery, it's basically telling us how to act, and I like it that way.
Re: Never... by jessicazee	15-Feb-05/3:53 PM
A lot of these lines are just silly, but "Never believe anyone who doubts your trust" makes sense.
Re: Little Fly by PodPoet	15-Feb-05/3:49 PM
lol. It's not clear whether you're serious or poking fun, and that makes it a good poem. I don't think you should call it Concrete.
Re: Bleed ,Rip and Tear by NoSage	15-Feb-05/3:42 PM
Please don't call this a sonnet. Thank you, I feel better now. The first half is a nice little sermon on using small hurts to our advantage. Some will say that all preaching in poetry is bad. "Show, don't tell," they chant endlessly. But I like your little sermon. Then you get weird with the lukewarm thing, as if you might be bringing Scripture into it. And when God talks, well, it seems like a another way of saying to use hurts to our advantage.
Re: a comment on Piercings by PsydewaysTears	15-Feb-05/11:34 AM
It does lack depth, but that's not what we're complaining about. The line "But only if they please" means absolutely nothing! You put it there only to rhyme with sneeze. That's what a forced rhyme is.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/11:21 AM
Wax poetic, will you? Sorry, my heart lacks a truncheon. Obviously, I and my poem give more credit to a man’s character than his appearance. I think Polynesians are mostly an attractive race. I suppose by your definition, that makes me racist.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/8:17 AM
Yes, and I don't pay much attention to most of it. It’s a word game for a lot of them, devoid of felt life. It’s encouraging to hear someone say, “Love hard.”
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/8:07 AM
lol. But I knew one who mildly harmed me once.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/8:03 AM
Maybe it we sent them some sweet Valentine sentiment it would take the edge off their angst. Maybe they just don’t have any love in their lives.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/7:57 AM
We must try for patience here. You see, there are folks on this site burdened with notions about race and its affect on intelligence. They’re held back from understanding the finer aspects of language, culture and diversity. Now let’s prepare ourselves for a barrage of malarkey about the benefits of being properly born.
Re: a comment on Piercings by PsydewaysTears	15-Feb-05/7:37 AM
That's your opinion. If you don't want ours, don't post.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/7:22 AM
Yes, or brown, yellow or white. Hell, he might even be English, but that’s a stretch.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/7:21 AM
Yes, that too.
Re: a comment on The Man I Love by Dovina	15-Feb-05/7:20 AM
I like the way you attempt to discredit icing or “icing.”
Re: a study in blossoms and beauty by oneglove	14-Feb-05/3:46 PM
I'm glad I'm not your woman. I'd hate to be gushed over like this.