Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina	10-Nov-05/6:39 AM
I see now that your passion will never subside. You will clutter each and every poem, mine or not, until I give in to you and answer why I said blacks are the most different from whites, or retract it. Well ok then. I now commit to doing that, but it will take some time which I don’t have now. Perhaps this will abate the onslaught.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	10-Nov-05/6:34 AM
Alert and standing vertical with respect to his center of gravity. Actually there's no other way to stand without falling.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	10-Nov-05/6:32 AM
No good reason for the candle. It's just in keeping with the image of a poet who holds a candle and mirror to society. I read it somewhere.
Re: I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	8-Nov-05/2:48 PM
Yeah, love the unlovable and thumb your nose at those who sneer. Then take her, as in the last line, and drive far away.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/2:35 PM
Probably not, I haven't smelled it.
Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/2:34 PM
My bad - turtle envy?
Re: a comment on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa	8-Nov-05/2:32 PM
I looked at your homepage. You are from England with blond hair. This must be about someone else.
Re: Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa	8-Nov-05/2:30 PM
Why did he go into the bathroom grey? And why the British spelling of gray? Wasn't this in the morning? In evening he might be gray with dirt. "had heard" could be just heard.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/12:23 PM
Read "Lady Bradbury's Excursion" then reconsider.
Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/12:19 PM
No, I've always remained sheltered, shelled perhaps.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	8-Nov-05/12:18 PM
Please notice the sequence. I was not talking to you.
Re: The Other by Caducus	8-Nov-05/11:30 AM
The last verse is especially nice. Low skirt, at arms length, closer now. The tortise image is hard to imagine, but the rest of Verse 1 makes the scene clear. Verse 3 seems contorted as if Line 4 should be Line 2.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	8-Nov-05/10:32 AM
Are you like 18?
Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina	8-Nov-05/10:27 AM
The original topic of this conversation is not whether -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. is racist. Try again, and actually read this time.
Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina	8-Nov-05/10:24 AM
Obviously not!
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/10:22 AM
Thanks Mona. That goes for all who do not admit to being masters.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/10:22 AM
Thanks Z. The writing of crap poetry has been my goal for a long time now. It’s good to find some budding appreciation.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/10:21 AM
Thanks, C.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	8-Nov-05/10:20 AM
Okay, it was a weak girlish kick. I will try again only after you kick back with a genuine comment on the poem.
Re: the band by celticskatermatt1	7-Nov-05/6:25 PM
I'd rather play my own tune, make it ryhm, tap its rythm, than to settle for the band. That would be real.