regarding some deleted poem...	30-May-04/11:30 PM
good stuff
Re: A heart without keys by sliver	30-May-04/11:31 PM
simple and sweet
Re: untitled: dedicated to my soldier/husband by SweetJuliet10	31-May-04/9:58 PM
is this a joke?
Re: not titled by coolassbob	31-May-04/10:18 PM
refreshing i like your style
Re: Web of darkness: Through a gold eye by suprembeaner	31-May-04/10:19 PM
i don't like it it's pretty cliche
Re: Sex Mob by nothingtoanyone	31-May-04/10:20 PM
like the descriptions sometimes a bit over the top though
Re: R.O.X. by InvertedEar	31-May-04/10:22 PM
beautiful
Re: The Portal by geewhiz1962	31-May-04/10:25 PM
i like the mystique you have alot of potential
regarding some deleted poem...	6-Jun-04/1:34 PM
it's good but this part is weak "So, we could remember what it means To be the “good guys” and then I could be proud of my country once again." the moe stuff is awesome.
Re: Lost by arduinn	13-Jun-04/8:41 AM
teenage angst
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Jun-04/8:50 AM
wow. i'm impressed. :)