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The Portal (Lyric) by geewhiz1962
80 degrees and rising fast. Peace for a time. Lets make it last. The Portal of light, so minor so bright Maybe just hours. Once a month. Always seems special, always seems right. The nights in the portal, so few so slight. So much gloom, sometimes despair. Optimism of knowing. They made such a pair. The Portal of light, so minor so bright. Maybe just hours, Once for months Always seems special, always seems right. The nights in the portal, so few so slight. The rain never came. The neighbors abstained. They felt as one, they felt the same. The Portal of light, so minor so bright Only those hours, Only that season Always seems special, always seems right. The nights in the portal, so few so slight. The moon can be faceless. The moon can be new. Times were good, times were best. In the Portal of light, so minor so bright. Only these times, Who knows the reasons. Always seems special, always seems right. The nights in the portal, so short, so right.

Up the ladder: make me smile
Down the ladder: The Reason

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0397344
Overall Rank: 7024
Posted: April 9, 2003 9:28 AM PDT; Last modified: September 13, 2003 9:31 AM PDT
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[8] Ranger @ 213.120.56.37 | 9-Apr-03/11:35 AM | Reply
Well this really confused me, I don't know about everyone else but I believe that it needs to be clearer. I really liked the images though. I'll give it an 8, that should make up for the fact that nobody else has read it yet. Nice effort.
[n/a] geewhiz1962 @ 206.21.122.21 > Ranger | 9-Apr-03/4:03 PM | Reply
This is about myself and a friend lying in the moonlight last summer. The Portal appeared with the full moon between some trees in her backyard.
[9] killingjuliet @ 142.163.145.103 | 31-May-04/10:25 PM | Reply
i like the mystique
you have alot of potential
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