| Re: a comment on Getting the Cool Kids To Like Me by the codeine kid |
26-Jun-04/1:03 PM |
oh dear the big boys have come out to play abd they are unhappy because someone has pinched their ball...oh and i take it you mean you're a cock and not your a cock...just what do they teach you at those weekly meetings you attend at the frustrated unpublished writers meetings down at the poemrankers arms(real ale only) (nice one p!)...and you and god's hussy might as well be the same person because you are both self absorbed, humourless hags and in the words of the great James Joyce and Johnny Rotten ...you are both bollix!
oh and tyhe way you dismiss "Pop culture" with sneering contempt gives you away as the prissy,psuedo intellectual snob you so obviously are...and you're not even clever (or big!)
You tit...
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| Re: a comment on The Red Basket by pain killer |
2-Jun-04/1:59 PM |
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okay...sorry about the "angry chickens" but there are really no other kind..honestly...at least i didn't go for plucking and clucking!
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| Re: a comment on FINGER PIE by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/1:55 PM |
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Hairy pie. this is fantastic. a woman under the covers never ages. i bet there's loads of "poets" on this site wish they'd wrote that line. Stunning.
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| Re: a comment on wolf rose PART 2 by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/1:52 PM |
you don't live near that pub do you? The Slaughtered Lamb or whatever it's called...the one on the yorkshire moors as immortalised in American Werewolf in London? Just thought i'd ask
"Who be that stranger yon barrr?"
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| Re: a comment on Rape by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/1:47 PM |
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| Re: a comment on GENTLE JANE by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/1:45 PM |
Titan...i'm reading your stuff and there seems to be a recurring theme here...you seem to be a happy fun loving guy who obviously enjoys winding up the more pretentious elements on poemranker and you make me feel embarressed about my own miserabilist self pitying tendencies (I'm not a trainspotter however...THAT one really is made up okay) (is it really a coincidence that poemranker rhymes with w.....???
) but Titan...are you getting enough?
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| Re: Sisters of mercy by titan69 |
2-Jun-04/1:38 PM |
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i love the narcotic...robotic (ally) bit. full marks for even thinking you could get away with it. and also the line about "emotions welling" most people would have gone on to rhyme it with "penis swelling" or summat but no...you lead us astray ther reign us back in with "she put her hands across my mouth to try and stop me yelling" genius!keep up the squiggling and squirming!!!
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| Re: a comment on STEP 4 by the codeine kid |
2-Jun-04/1:15 PM |
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ha thanks titan...although this is not autobiographical..it's made up y'know...as a matter of fact my life is very much...ah okay you got me i have a shit life...how'dya guess?..i've just been through the wringer recently..i'll get over it though...just gotta write a few more poems i guess...art as personal therapy and all that..now let me check out some a your stuff..i'm still very much a newcomer to this site...still finding my way around
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| Re: Jimmy and Chichi Choo (Sub-Dylan Bullshit Blues) by the codeine kid |
2-Jun-04/9:17 AM |
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this is more a song than a poem...to be read aloud in the style of dylan's homesick blues...there's no big or clever words or word play but it kinda...SKANKS
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| Re: Preacher Man by masticatedmess |
31-May-04/12:11 PM |
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this is good man. s'like something nick cave would pass off as writing in "and the ass saw the angel"...nick cave meets flannery o connor under the shadow of the peyote. good stuff
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| Re: johnny dowd by the codeine kid |
27-May-04/11:07 AM |
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this is my first poem and i think it is a very good one. i know that is not very modest, but the neither is johnny dowd...or tom waits for that matter. now i know i'm no tom waits...but i aam the codeine kid!
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