Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	cyan9 217.40.63.105	16-Nov-05/8:46 AM
Zodiac, petty insults aside, if you are going to read and comment, I have noticed that you seem to start from the assumption that a piece of work is some kind of clone or lifeless colation of words in order to imitate something. I would encourage you to read the piece as a scene unfolding and attempt to enjoy that scene, rather than likening it to something else.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	cyan9 217.40.63.105	16-Nov-05/8:42 AM
It doesn't take a lot to set you off then
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	cyan9 217.40.63.105	16-Nov-05/8:40 AM
I'm sure with a slightly more intelligence you may be able to unravel its meaning.
Re: a comment on Haven by cyan9	cyan9 217.40.63.105	16-Nov-05/8:16 AM
If you are going to leave feedback like this on my work, please save your energy, it shows quite a degree of disregard and emotional underdevelopement to see it as a dictionary of words rather than to view and experience the sensations of the scene unfolding. As for being formatted by a post-prime Billy Corgan, this is of no value or use, and looks like you are trying to sound more intelligent than you are. I appreciate the fact that you are giving by commenting and rating poems (which is one better than most people) but please have a think about what you are giving. This comment has served no use to me, and has caused very mild offense, what was the point?
Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:50 AM
LOL! That's one of the best comments I've heard here in a while.
Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:45 AM
He'll probably just get himself boycotted.
Re: Aurora by Aetius	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:40 AM
Good one. Did you know that your list of poems in your homepage form the acrostic "ASS. U C IT?
Re: a comment on After Fighting (More Blood Edit) by zodiac	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:31 AM
Grasshopper finally snatches a pebble from the master's hand.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:21 AM
I was thinking mockery: "No nothing like." A very poor sentence, I'm geussing without education.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:17 AM
No but that's fucking hilarious.
Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:10 AM
Shit! You'll have to copy and paste into your addrees bar and enter it. The link don't work.
Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/7:07 AM
Now I remember why I didn't bother seeing it again. They might as well have just turned to the audiance and flipped us the bird. This reminds me of a joke. It's near the bottom of the page at this link. It's called The pink and purple polka dotted ping pong ball. You'll recognize it as a big block of text. Make sure you read every word of it slowly and carefully. Enjoy. http://www.circleofbastards.com/cgi-bin/ultimatebb.cgi?ubb=get_topic;f=1;t=001775
Re: a comment on When Did You Walk Away? by TLRufener	zodiac 217.144.7.195	16-Nov-05/7:06 AM
Yes, but most of your questions have answers, and most of those answers are either yes or no. To name a few others, Q: Where have equality slipped off to? A: It was never here. You've been taken by an equality impersonator with a bad accent. Q: Did you ever hear me cry? A: No. And I don't want to. Stop that right now, mister. Q: Did the Angel knock upon your door? A: If it did, I was in the shower. Q: Did they carry you away? A: Who? Weren't you talking about one angel? Um, no. Q: When you looked into their eyes did they option you to stay? A: No. Nice grammar though. Q: What did I do to make them take you from me? A: You have to believe in them to make them come, usually accompanied by saying 'Angel, Angel, Angel' in a mirror at exactly midnight. Buying an Angel tv-show box-set does it too. Q: When did you walk away? A: Easy. Right before I wasn't there any more. Time to move on. What I'm trying to say is that people read poems be spoonfed answers, or to check their answers against someone else's. If I ever did think of a question I thought had no answer, I'd avoid putting it in a poem, for fear some reader who knew the answer would think I was kind of dumb. You can't say I'm not talking about your poems.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	zodiac 217.144.7.195	16-Nov-05/6:49 AM
Was it a play on gizzing? I already missed it.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/6:47 AM
This is an easy one Zodiac.
Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW	zodiac 217.144.7.195	16-Nov-05/6:46 AM
I don't want to ruin it for you if you honestly don't remember, but it's worth watching again if just for the line "Why can't we just die, mommy?" and the part where Mimi says to Dave Duchovny "So I guess I don't get into heaven" and Dave's ghost says "No, guess not" and that's the end.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	zodiac 217.144.7.195	16-Nov-05/6:43 AM
At least I guessed how to correctly spell guessing. You're right, I'm not putting any thought into this.
Re: a comment on Us Sinners by BrandonW	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/6:38 AM
Here's my Dovina answer: I believe it was a serious satire. My answer: It's been a long time since I've seen it. Honestly all I can remember is Mimi's tits. Everything else I remember from the movie are scenes from The Seventh Sign.
Re: a comment on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9	cyan9 217.40.63.105	16-Nov-05/6:35 AM
No nothing like. A very poor comment, I'm geussing without thought.
Re: a comment on When Did You Walk Away? by TLRufener	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	16-Nov-05/6:20 AM
Yeah exactly like what precisely does make your shower curtain suck in when you turn on the shower? This topic has been debated by people with real scientific degrees. Apparently nobody has gotten the funding yet to do the appropriate tests.