| Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
13-Dec-05/4:41 PM |
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RE: I'm sorry, but when I see the words 'socialism and civic responsibility'...'institutions' that 'collectively' mandate you help a worthless neighbor, that you OWE something to anybody who has his hand out, that your sweat, labour, and reward should be used to raise 'the collective' of people needing your assistance...well...I stop listening. Responsible citizenship, to me, does not mean "responsible to and for the citizens".
Exactly what do you think welfare is?
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| Re: Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
13-Dec-05/4:40 PM |
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Ok, it's a children's poem...I can get with that...until I saw that comment, I thought you were a retarded.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:39 PM |
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| Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
13-Dec-05/4:38 PM |
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PS-From the other string:
LilMsLadyPoet: I'm sorry, but when I see the words 'socialism and civic responsibility'...'institutions' that 'collectively' mandate you help a worthless neighbor, that you OWE something to anybody who has his hand out, that your sweat, labour, and reward should be used to raise 'the collective' of people needing your assistance...well...I stop listening. Responsible citizenship, to me, does not mean "responsible to and for the citizens".
zodiac: That's all well and good, and I'm as egotist (or egoist, I always forget which,) as the next guy. But what would you say if I suggested that your future is very much in the hands of those people you refuse to feed? (Don't believe me? What are you paying for gas recently?)
What if the odds are very high that you or someone you know will be blown up by some worthless guy you didn't hand out to? Are handouts justfied if they might prevent that?
I'd very much like to hear your answer.
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| Re: a comment on Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
13-Dec-05/4:37 PM |
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Bitches ain't shit but ho's and tricks - Dr. Dre
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| Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
nentwined 64.60.192.131 |
13-Dec-05/4:37 PM |
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:35 PM |
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ok, that's a better answer. All I personally ask, and it may be too much to ask, is that a shred of comonly understood language prevail.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
13-Dec-05/4:35 PM |
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If anyone knows how to Jabberwock it's him.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
13-Dec-05/4:33 PM |
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Have you ever read Jabberwocky?
http://www.jabberwocky.com/carroll/jabber/jabberwocky.html
As stated in above comments it's about writing a story using a lot of invented words and yet still tying together something like a story. The idea is that the reader uses their own imagination with the made up words and in doing so takes the poem to a personal level that the poet could not normally achieve.
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| Re: a comment on War (edit) by zodiac |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:33 PM |
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I'm in a better mood. I must now step back and observe my mood. Done. It was a frivilous sputtering, but in reality I'd like to meet you and not have you know who I am.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
13-Dec-05/4:32 PM |
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See if you can get -=D_A=-,P.I., to talk about Carroll. You know he taught 'Maths' at their college, Oxford.
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| Re: You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
wilco 24.92.74.122 |
13-Dec-05/4:31 PM |
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That's a super story and you make some good points. However, you've got a couple of plot holes here.
1) Why was your mother on welfare while getting her Masters? I don't presume to know your family's situation, but why didn't she get a job?
2) You first present the option that people create and invent out of necessity. Then, later, you state that people who "might die tomorrow" won't do that. Do we all not cower under the possibility that we might die tomorrow?
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| Re: a comment on War (edit) by zodiac |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
13-Dec-05/4:29 PM |
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You were rather cool about the idea when I mentioned it before. How do I know you're sincere now?
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:26 PM |
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Alright, LilMsLadyPoet, please don't delete it. And please don't do it again.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:24 PM |
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Be serious. I'm studious, non-frivilous, impatient-with-levity person who wants an honest answer.
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| Re: a comment on You Have It Backwards by LilMsLadyPoet |
zodiac 69.132.67.140 |
13-Dec-05/4:24 PM |
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No!!! You're going to make her delete it. That's it, I'm multiple-tenning her.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
13-Dec-05/4:22 PM |
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Why not Lewis Carrol did.
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:08 PM |
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Of course, youre kidding. You don't just write with no direction, absolutely no clue?
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| Re: a comment on War (edit) by zodiac |
Dovina 17.255.240.206 |
13-Dec-05/4:05 PM |
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I'm all aflutter. Could we? Could we? Really?
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| Re: a comment on Oh Merry Fay (part 1) by ALChemy |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
13-Dec-05/4:01 PM |
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